My Secret Valentine

I close my eyes and there you are
As real as real can be
Leaving behind my mundane life
I drift into your fantasy

A transparent robe clings to your curves
Dancing in a warm and carefree wind
Your smile invites me to come close
And explore what lies within

Aroused I sit at my desk
Daydreaming about your touch
I can smell the essence of your gorgeousness
As I fall deeper and deeper in lust

I close my eyes and there you are
As real as real can be
Some day perhaps, when I open them
You'll be standing in front of me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/15/2012 1:23:00 PM
A daydream full of imaginary desire....well done : )
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Date: 2/14/2012 9:25:00 PM
full of mystique that levaes much to the imagination, joe...i'm starstruck!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/14/2012 9:00:00 PM
What happened next? Did your boss wake you up from your dream? Good fanciful write with great descriptiveness and rhyming.
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Date: 2/14/2012 1:15:00 PM
Wonderful Valentine poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/14/2012 12:51:00 PM
Hope Valentines day will come next week to,so many sweet poem....Thank you Joe. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/14/2012 12:20:00 PM
great ending to a fine poem! i enjoyed it!
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Date: 2/14/2012 11:57:00 AM
Joe fantasies keep the world turning..David
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Date: 2/14/2012 11:36:00 AM
Ah hmmm, do pray tell who this secret Valentine is, Joe?? But hmm sometimes the mystery makes it even more fun, right? ^_~ -- to tell or not to tell, that is the question! Enjoyed this write, Joe! Happy Valentine's Day to you :D!
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