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My Secret Garden, Coin of Dreams

Darkness lies behind the locked gate Vastness is what’s beyond the wall Crassness delves into my longed soul Fondness it makes a great heart call Key to the gate I have in hand Magically I’ll enter heaven Hopefully I’ll hold the threshold Tenderly I see what’s given To the center, here’s the fountain Blue is the water now inside New are the coins in the fountain True I hold this place by my side I dig in my pants for a coin Sigh, I make a wish beyond grave Tie my dreams to the coin, heartache By this wish her dreams will I save Russell Sivey Form Lento Contest: MY SECRET GARDEN Sponsor: Nette Onclaud 2/13/2014

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Date: 4/17/2014 1:11:00 PM
Nice one Russell I like wishing wells and how you depict the process. Well done
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Date: 2/22/2014 11:35:00 PM
Lovely write my friend congrats....Seren
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Date: 2/21/2014 8:57:00 PM
No wonder Nette chose this to be among the winners. Good write and congratulations on your winning.
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Date: 2/21/2014 7:22:00 PM
Ahh Russell...I felt this one a lot!!!!! Faving it....congratulations on your win
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Date: 2/21/2014 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations Russell, a fine piece of writing.
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:47:00 PM
So romantic Russ! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/21/2014 3:36:00 PM
you took the theme and ran away with flying colors, russell...i like how you focused on one aspect in your garden.. swee congrats on your award in my contest.. huggs!
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Date: 2/15/2014 8:55:00 PM
Nicely done for the secret garden contest. I wish I could feel as inspired as you . You have been using lots of contests themes lately and I am less than ever!!!
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Date: 2/13/2014 10:27:00 AM
ohh, thank you, russell.. happy hearts' day!. huggs
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Date: 2/13/2014 8:08:00 AM
Reads like winning material to me..I can't remember if I tried Lento form or not..Remember the song "Three Coins In A Fountain"..This one has good flow and rhyme in it..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visit..We had some snow mixed with sleet about 8:10 this morn but it did not last long..Sara
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Date: 2/13/2014 7:48:00 AM
magical Russell I love your garden beautiful pen superb poem hugs
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Date: 2/13/2014 1:42:00 AM
A great one you delivered here Russell,gl in the contest.
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