My Scene

The morning sunlight shines warm

      our blanket like a curtain

      reveals a beautiful show

         a stage with encores






~not for contest~
couldn't help but write one..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smalling Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Love it, but then beauty is not hard to love.
Neels Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:45 AM
Well this would probably have won if you could enter lol.. Enjoyed this smokey write Mr. F, love Wilma
Brown Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 4:19 AM
What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Michael. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 7:09 PM
Whoa.....no need for an electric blanket!! LOL !! Good one!! ~ love, Carrie
Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 8:34 AM
Candid fire Michael! Beautiful expressions of "spicy". Love it! Good luck in the contest... Lay
Faber Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 8:29 AM
thats a good one. another very visual poem. you have some awesome talent. and again thanks for lookin at my stuff, i greatly appreciate it, nick
Muzzey Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 8:00 AM
A wonderful write you have penned. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
Sweetheart Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 7:44 AM
oh wonderful and would have been a top winner for me luv.. ... .. how about those boys in blue today.. will they go out on a win??? what do u think they will do with Coughlin now??? what a Season luv..enjoy W.K. from J.G. with luv always and forever more...
Falotico Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 6:46 AM
If I could enter my own co sponsored contest with Linda, this would be it...lol Couldn't resist.. Thanks for all the great entries so far, this will be hard to judge for sure....luv Michael
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