Nette Onclaud Poet Rispetto

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My Sanctuary

The porch is wrapped in glittered shroud 
As windows teeter in the breeze
 Here, only bright sighs are allowed 
Across panes, hour's gentlesr breeze.
While toileLike shuffles of a weary tree.

Dim lanterns cut through brightened shade 
With moonlight glowing starlit white
 And blossoms petals... inter-laid 
In meditation, I find light.


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Written 2/2/2019
Carolyn Devonshire’s My Place Multi-Part Easter Contest

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Sara Kendrick February 12, 2019 at 12:32 PM I have read your short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Caren Krutsinger February 5, 2019 at 10:18 AM Congratulations! Beautifully done, as usual,my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong February 5, 2019 at 12:55 AM Back to Congratulate you on your win Nette! Have a great Valentine's Day! : ) xxoo

Sand Blown February 4, 2019 at 5:19 PM right on...if i ever wind up in a home give me more than a door on a hallway

Barbara Gorelick February 4, 2019 at 5:16 PM Enjoyed your poem my dear..congrats on your win. BG

Carolyn Devonshire February 4, 2019 at 12:29 PM Nette, I delayed posting winners for this contest because I was hoping you would read the blogs or contest updates that specified the ABABABCC rhyme scheme. Although you chose a rhyme that is acceptable for Rispettos, it is not the one I had stipulated. Your poem is sooo lovely, dear. It was very difficult for me to judge this contest because contestants wrote so many incredibly beautiful poems. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

M. L. Kiser February 4, 2019 at 3:50 AM What a soothing poem! You should do well in the contest; good luck.

Connie Marcum Wong February 3, 2019 at 9:10 PM I can just imagine sitting in one of those chairs in the picture and relaxing and meditating Nette. Lovely! : ) xxoo

Heidi Sands February 3, 2019 at 11:22 AM Oh very nice Nette! I enjoyed this and it is a perfect sanctuary :)

Tom Cunningham February 3, 2019 at 10:37 AM We all need a sanctuary Nette and if that picture is yours, I'm jealous. Good luck. Soup mail urgent . Tom.

Vijay Pandit February 3, 2019 at 10:06 AM Indeed your place is a sanctuary..lovely photo..great imagery..best for a win, Nette.