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In the night sky, a lone star's light, My heart's scar, a poetic sight. It murmurs tales of yearning, woe, Inspiriting words that I bestow. Loneliness, my muse, its bitter caress, Directs my pen, igniting finesse. Through verses mournful, emotions fly, Turning pain to pearls, oh so high. Each line penned, loneliness finds reprieve, A bond forms, a moment to believe. In solitude, my words freely roam, A poetic tome, my heart's sweet home.

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Valsa George

Date: 4/12/2024 8:03:00 PM

"Through verses mournful, emotions fly, Turning pain to pearls, oh so high." The pain of loneliness is turned into pearls of poesy.... ! Wow, so sweet. This is such a soulful write and I can feel your pain. Into my Fave, dear Jay ji !

Bill Baker

Date: 4/12/2024 6:20:00 PM

An excellent poem on the source and inspiration of sad and loneliness poems, Jay. Well written my friend. Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2024 10:24:00 AM

It would be a bittersweetness. This is a beautiful reflection on sad piems

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/12/2024 8:15:00 AM

Thanks for this poetic look at sadness. It drew me into its inner emotion.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/11/2024 7:08:00 PM

Hello Jay, your poem is a wonderful exploration of the symbiotic relationship between loneliness and creativity. I loved that through these eloquent verses, you capture the essence of solitude as both muse and companion. Your artistic words transform pain into art, offering solace and beauty in the darkest of moments. Jay it’s a testament to the power of poetry to heal and transcend. - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/11/2024 5:40:00 PM

As I read your poem, I felt your broken heart and your wounded soul. I liked: "loneliness my muse"--that's true for me sometimes, too, but it's a different kind of loneliness. These words, however, resonated with me: Through verses mournful, emotions fly, Turning pain to pearls, oh so high. Those words are brilliant! Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2024 1:10:00 PM

- Poems from your deep interior ... sensitively - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/11/2024 11:24:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad write/great picture. Do be sad. Here is a smile...... Have a fun day writing away.................

Lin Lane

Date: 4/11/2024 9:44:00 AM

Dear Jay, I've been told that my most favored poems have been those in which I bare my broken heart, the tears bled from my soul, and wounds left unhealed. Because this is sorrowfully true, I understand your verses with the wisdom born of such loss. Though I'm not lonely, memories of lost loves linger deep inside of me. If the tears I've cried while writing some of my poetry could be used as dew, I'd have nurtured valleys over the years. Thank you for writing these soulful rhyming lines.