My Relationship With God

I walk hand in hand, in happiness and hymn.
Happy heart I am an honored helper.
Hope to one day herald in hymns at home in heaven.
I pray to Him, hook and heed His word,
meditate on His holy verses to honor and know Him better.
Let the Holy Spirit not be hidden, but head my honesty.

I grow in gratitude with God glorious gifts granted.
A gift of His glories with eternal life with genuine grace
and guidance in my daily life.
Guilty of sin, there is no greater gift
then giving and spending my life to God.

9/12/2020


Alliteration Regarding Relationship With God Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Beata Agustin
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Agustin Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 5:13 AM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing the joy of having a sweet relationship with God through this poetic testimony of yours. Indeed, there is no greater gift than giving and spending our life to the Lord. God bless you.
Kauffman Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 10:48 AM
"Happy heart," "honored helper," "home in heaven" - what beautiful images, Eve in your profound and joyful statement of faith. Congratulations on your winning placement. Sending you blessings for your day.
Fowler Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 8:19 AM
So sweet Eve. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Shaw Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 11:42 PM
I learn a lot from you, Eve, when it comes to other poetry forms, here I learn again from your alliteration poem and how to put it to use, I find this like a lovely letter to God, who on reading it, shines his love down on you . . . : )
Watt Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 4:54 PM
Eve, amen to all of the above. Nice statement of faith told with alliteration and humility. Hugs ~ John
Buhagiar Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 2:19 AM
Well done Eve. Great use of alliteration in praise of God. ~~
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