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My Refurbished Boudoir- Etheree

My Refurbished Boudoir- Etheree

Morning
Sun-beams stormed
My refurbished boudoir
Setting aflame autumn hues
Curtains orange and ochery bedspread
Cushioned upholstery of yellow and green
Nostalgic reminders of my voyage  to Columbus'
Anchored Land last October, walking through Cheek Wood's
Crackling rusty leaves as eyes painted multifarious colours in
My heart, marvelling at painters dabbling the harvest with vivacity

September 20, 2015
Contest : For Love Of October- Etheree
Sponsor : Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © Balveen Cheema | Year Posted 2015

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/3/2015 6:00:00 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Etherees are delightful..Sara Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/4/2015 12:41:00 AM Sara, thanks for dropping by and complimenting my attempt on etheree! Love, Balveen

Skat A Date: 10/2/2015 10:42:00 PM Balveen, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/2/2015 11:11:00 PM So sweet of you Skat! It was kind of Andrea to mention me!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/1/2015 2:38:00 AM Balveen, I don't know if I met you before, but I wanted to tell you how pretty this poem is. I could not place it in the numbered placements because you used word count instead of syllable count. I hope you will take a look at the other winners to see how they did theirs. I bet you can make some awesome etheree in the future! Congrats on your HM. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 10/1/2015 4:58:00 AM My loss Andrea! Thanks for the critical appreciation!

Michael Tor Date: 9/22/2015 11:35:00 AM Nicely done Balveen beautiful canvas painted here with your vibrant words. Enjoyed reading. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 9/22/2015 12:37:00 PM Your appreciation is valuable! Thaanks Michael! Regards, Balveen