My Precious

i virtually hug the stuffing out of my birthstone,
the moody opal, with its raging volcanic flame —
leaping, delighting, entertaining my eyes.

specks of tinted lipstick - yellow, orange, red
kiss my irises. iridescent charm of color, play
with my mind, body and soul. calmer effects —

of green and blue like leafy trees & Caribbean sea.
Like Frodo, i slide this otherworldly warmth on my finger
rotating the silver band - “my precious” cabochon.

1/8/2019

*Frodo and “My Precious” - from movie “Lord of the Rings”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 7:52 PM
So beautifully penned, Kim. When you get going with color and imagery, you create true masterpieces. Bravo! ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 8:03 PM
Thank you, dear Gershon!
Kiser Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 6:59 AM
It's my birthstone also; a magical stone; I like the black ones, too. This was really wonderful.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 7:10 AM
Thank you, M.L.!
La France Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 8:40 PM
Kim, a very colorful poem, dreamy, well done ~
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 7:10 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Faulkner Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 1:58 PM
Such dazzling vibrancy in this, truly like a glowing stone!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Thank you, Michelle!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 11:10 AM
Kim, this beautiful poem went to my FAV list. It is beautiful! Love the imagery and the feelings of it.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 12:56 PM
Thank you so much xx
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