My Plea

Oh God! Alienate me from foes, dissipate me from vice,
Gravitate me to righteousness make me noble and wise.

In this malignant world with savage and inurbane minds,
Life has become hostile and peace is hard to find.

Please forgive me, for I may sound capricious sometimes,
I don't know how to flatter or praise You, in my poems.

Give me courage, I am lost like a scapegoat in wilderness,
Transitory is life, bestow me light take away the darkness.

In my perspicuous plea, all I want is sorrows to end,
Show me the right path that leads to you, for me to blend.





1st Place Only - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Laura Loo



Sept 15, 2016.
Ten Word Challenge - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: John Hamilton
Received First Place. 
Contest judged on: Sept 17, 2016.

10 WORDS to be used:
1. ALIENATE 2. CAPRICIOUS 3. DISSIPATE 4. GRAVITATE 5.FLATTER 6. INURBANE 7. MALIGNANT 8.PERSPICUOUS 9. TRANSITORY 10. SCAPEGOAT
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Gupta Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:09 AM
A very beautiful poem...the plea hidden behind the lines is very moving. A great piece of work, Meenakshi!
Raina Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Sohom...
Martins Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Lovely, just lovely. Spiritual and positive. The most positive of all entries (especially mine, lol) I believe :) Congrats on shared win. Richard
Raina Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment....
Inman Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 8:32 AM
A lovely write Meenakshi, with a much more positive message than mine, lol. Beautifully done.
Raina Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Thank you James...
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 5:37 AM
Fabulous use of ten words! Congrats on the win! :)
Raina Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Thank you Sunita...
Wigley Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 12:28 AM
A worthy little prayer, Meenakshi, well done. Viv x
Raina Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Thanks Viv...
Allison Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Many congrats on your win Meenakshi:-) hugs Jan xx
Raina Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Thanks Jan...
Hamilton Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 2:56 PM
A great use of the 10 words, Meenakshi, and although using more lines than some it was still very succinct, but I loved the meaning, with a spiritual tone, won me over. Congrats on a fine shared win!
Raina Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Thank you John....I am glad that you liked it.
Haight Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Excellent, Meenakshi! You have created a beautiful and heartfelt plea using these difficult words. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Raina Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Thank you Sandra...
Roper Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 8:44 PM
very inspiring way of using your 10 words, Meenakshi, good luck in the contest
Raina Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Thank you Eve...
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