My Planters

Each year when the summer is nigh
I drag out my planters and buy
     Some flowers to plant
     But somehow I can't
Make them grow, though I really do try.

I gently tamp down all the soil.
With watering, I am quite loyal.
     While others' plants thrive
     Mine are barely alive;
All my efforts Ma Nature does foil.

Still, just planted they look pretty good.
If they lasted, the way that they should,
     I'd be shocked as they come
     'Cause my never-green thumb
Would have done what I'd hoped that it would.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Merryman Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 10:46 PM
I love how you wrote this in limerick form, Ilene. I tend to have the same problem with plants.
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Very relatable for me ... I do exactly the same and feel alike too, Just now I am attending to some indoors and working at the tab too ... enjoyed a great deal ...
Murray Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 7:01 PM
I know what you mean Ilene. I am good with outdoor, but all indoor plants never do well for me.
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