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My Place of Bleeding- Oceans and Time

Beyond these poems,
I am alot harder to read
And those that never seen me in real life
who read these things,
Might find that hard to believe 
But its true this is where i come to bleed

My thoughts i pour out. 
in hope that they wont destroy me
Its true i fell hard for a girl lately 
And this time i guess in ways quite literally
I realize i can live without her..
But to do so would be a shame really
I don't need her..
I want her, and i guess through it all...in time ..
We shall see.
I just hope my visions are not delusions
It would be beyond hard to cope,
 knowing everything you believed,
Was just a coincidencial pattern of memories
I hope its her whom i am destined with
When 2 become 1 is a truly beautiful thing..
Dont you agree?
Even through so much pain and hardships..
I will remember my promise you see..
Even if its the death of me
Maybe she loves me..maybe not
But i cant picture being with anyone else
Even if tried..
I guess i got lost in her eyes
The moment we spoke..even if
We are separated by an ocean and of time 
This promise i made already...and my pride of it
I bare steady

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/19/2018 5:19:00 PM

Congratulations, Justin on POTD!

Justin Worthy
Date: 11/19/2018 5:21:00 PM

Thanks kim. :)

Constance La France

Date: 11/18/2018 5:58:00 PM

Justin, congratulations on POTD with this awesome write, well done and enjoy the honor ~

Justin Worthy
Date: 11/19/2018 5:22:00 PM

Thank you dear heart, i appreciate it:)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/18/2018 5:23:00 PM

Congrats Justine on poem of the day.

Justin Worthy
Date: 11/18/2018 5:29:00 PM

Thank you :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/18/2018 4:56:00 PM

Justin, Congratulations on POTD!! Way to Go!! Deeply introspective poem for sure. Cheers, Gary

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/18/2018 1:35:00 PM

Congratulations for POTD Justin :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/18/2018 11:04:00 AM

Congrats!!! on your POTD! my friend...your poetry bears all...love & light...^WW^

Justin Worthy
Date: 11/18/2018 5:30:00 PM

Thanks man :) glad you liked it

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/18/2018 10:27:00 AM

If you ask fo happiness the perfect girl for you will come along, it may be her! I can relate and only when I asked for happiness did I find my soulmate. This is a beautiful lament of love Justin. Congratulations on baving it honored with POTD!

Justin Worthy

Date: 11/18/2018 10:21:00 AM

Thank you everyone for all the compliments and appreciation today. I honestly wasnt expecting to get poem of the day but its true this is probably the deepest poem ive written on a personal and emotional level. You guys are awesome :) hope everyone has a beautiful and peaceful Sunday. Much love you guys

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/18/2018 9:07:00 AM

Hi Justin, dropping by with my congratulations on your Poem Of The Day Honour, with this honest, deep write. Your emotions flow from beginning to end as I read down your lines. have a wonderful Wednesday.....Mike.

Justin Worthy
Date: 11/18/2018 10:23:00 AM

Thanks Mike, glad you enjoyed it. :) have a awesome Sunday

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/18/2018 8:54:00 AM

Your deep, intimate introspective poem expresses your emotions with passionate intensity and brilliance. Beautiful reflections.. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors, Justin. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Justin Worthy
Date: 11/18/2018 10:15:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan, glad you enjoyed it. Have a blessed day :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/18/2018 8:49:00 AM

I can feel your heart in every word, as emotions are set free. Sometimes, love is an echo- coming back. Other times, it is silent. Everything will fall into place, when the time is right. Even though, waiting can be painful. This is beautiful and tender. Congratulations Justin, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Justin Worthy
Date: 11/18/2018 10:13:00 AM

I totally agree Brandy, everything happens for a reason even if we dont understand it at the time. Thank you for your kind words and taking time to read my poem :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2018 7:32:00 AM

I can relate, especially to the first part of the poem I cover up alot by using humour so few really know what is happening in my life. Adeep emotional poem that many can relate to, congratulations on your potdj ustin:-) Hugs Jan xx

Justin Worthy
Date: 11/18/2018 8:28:00 AM

Thank you Jan :) i hope it does rea ch out to others who relate, its nice to know we arent alone among it.