My Place: the Flesh of Flashy Bait

I fear that you are lonely, so I hope I pull you in,
 My place is warm, but quite a mess, 
 I’m glad you have stepped in,
 My space is has been divided,
 By the mad, the sane and should,
 We’ll take a tour, but just be warned,
 It’s no blissful neighbourhood,

On your right shoulder, a bulb burns your polyester,
A fickle light to, a forest of wooden floors,
Dotted and then cut, you go under,
Below the fleeting veils of a whispered law,

Beyond the currents, in which you blister,
To part the grip of the mantis clause, 
And end the starlight, which piles upon,
A playground spun with metal shores,

  Leave your thoughts, for we have just passed, 
  The madness, I still endure,
  But don’t breath relief, for their is still some believe,
  That the sane could be called the unsure,

For no nature, is the nurture,
To those impossible... deep-cutting dreams!
And kill me if I wonder, or even so ponder, within your immeasurable means!
For I’ve lost my heart, and my so called soul,
To a place that you have termed  ‘real’,
Where every action, bland in its satisfaction,
Entices the ungrateful to feel!

   Lastly we come, or so stumble upon,
   A world that I label the should,
   It’s here where you deal, with feelings unreal,
   And I question what you understood,

For this is a place, where my angels, you may sleep,
Amongst the livestock and the hay,
Groom each other, 
Or sharpen your claws,

Just rest my birds of prey...

    And so a place is all it takes,
    To become estranged with everyday,
    Where a seconds a second,
    And not a moment left in wait,
    Just another attention spun, 
    Around the flesh of flashy bait,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/23/2011 10:44:00 PM
What in the name of heaven and earth is this poem about?...you have fascinated me with this very complex piece of beauty.
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:27:00 PM
amazingly creative poetry FRANCOIS.. where have u been luv? this is so brilliantly constructed and composed.. vast imagery and emotion interspersed in lines of poetic art.. hoping all is well .. welcome back..luv..
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:26:00 PM
amazingly creative poetry FRANCOIS.. where have u been luv? this is so brilliantly constructed and composed.. vast imagery and emotion interspersed in lines of poetic art.. hoping all is well .. welcome back..luv..
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Date: 7/16/2011 12:51:00 PM
angels are not birds of prey...they hover over the misguided, the ones making wrong choices.. when one is guided by holy spirit that is not prey or predator, it is love that God is supplying, by supplying prophetic info about the other..when GOD lets you know their darkness, it is not prey, he tells you their darkness so you can tell them to change it so a better relationship can happen with GOD..so the darkness is removed..that is not preying on anyone
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Date: 7/16/2011 12:49:00 PM
hmm good poem, nurture the right thing though, always choose to nurture the right thing...and that means sacrifice of oneself..what nurtures me is loyalty, it is also nurtures GOD... when you are not loyal to something you love, that is not nature or nurture..
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