Sashi Prabhu Poet Rhyme

My Piece of Mind a New Begining

4th December 2011 ,sernabatim,Gois shack,
By Sashi .Prabhu(ZEAUOXIAN)

Calm waters come engulf my scorching mind,
Pour yourself in through my eyes, burning embers find.

Fumes of devilish sorrows, be engulfed so fast,
  Peace to look forward to, wash away memories of the past.

Tranquility drench your serenity into me,
Happiness corrode my skin and char it with peace to be.

Entwine your auric wings of joys around my heart,
Ooze from it pink flames, so darkness depart.

Edify myself with joys of life
darkness gone , light piercing through like a sharp prudish knife.

Welcome to my body all joys and peace,
Let it override the ebbing currents dwindle and decrease.

a new year dawns a new begining,
i will take it on my chin......

placement: third,
contest:show me any form/any theme max 15 lines,
sponsor: Brian Strand.

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Kim Merryman March 10, 2012 at 12:42 PM Wonderful imagery, Sashi. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 7, 2012 at 9:24 PM congrats Sashi on another exciting win for this electrifying write luv..

Charlotte Puddifoot March 7, 2012 at 4:31 PM congrats on your contest win; an intriguing mix of images, bright with the hope of a new beginning and the dawning of a new era :-)

Carol Sunshine Brown March 7, 2012 at 11:00 AM Good afternoon and congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "3rd place wins Only" contest Sashi. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A March 7, 2012 at 10:12 AM SASHI,,.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD Sashi Prabhu March 7, 2012 at 10:15 AM the thrill of putting up my work in your contest is always a joy........~sashi

Poet Destroyer A March 2, 2012 at 9:56 PM SASHI..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd Sashi Prabhu March 4, 2012 at 6:23 PM thank you... you r kind...........~sashi

Carol Sunshine Brown January 11, 2012 at 5:35 AM Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Sashi. Love, Carol Sashi Prabhu February 7, 2012 at 8:42 AM thank you Carol

Bob Quigley January 10, 2012 at 10:39 PM Wow. Very nice. Congratulations Sashi Sashi Prabhu February 7, 2012 at 8:42 AM thanks Bob

Joyce Johnson January 10, 2012 at 6:25 PM Congratulations Sashi. Love, Joyce Sashi Prabhu February 7, 2012 at 8:44 AM thanks Joyce

Kash Poet January 6, 2012 at 11:36 AM An excellent write Prabhu!Congratulations on your win. Sashi Prabhu January 7, 2012 at 5:49 AM a million thanks for the wishes...pl call me sashi

Jon Arno January 6, 2012 at 9:45 AM Congratulations Sashi on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon Sashi Prabhu January 7, 2012 at 5:49 AM thank you Jon..

Debra Squyres January 6, 2012 at 9:33 AM It flows well with such beauty. Enjoyed !! Congrats on placement in the contest !!! Well deserved !! Sashi Prabhu January 7, 2012 at 5:50 AM thanks Debra for the wishes....

Carol Sunshine Brown January 6, 2012 at 7:25 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any Top Twenty" contest Sashi. Love, Carol Sashi Prabhu January 6, 2012 at 7:46 AM thank you very much Sashi Prabhu January 6, 2012 at 7:39 AM thank you very much

Carol Sunshine Brown January 5, 2012 at 7:51 AM Congrats on your win in the "New Beginnings" contest Sashi. Love, Carol Sashi Prabhu January 5, 2012 at 10:16 AM thank you very much Carol

Andrea Dietrich December 30, 2011 at 10:36 AM Very interesting imagery, Sashi, Congratulations on your win with this creative poem. Sashi Prabhu December 31, 2011 at 4:10 AM thank you very much. season's greetings to you from Goa,India.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 30, 2011 at 2:07 AM Congraulations x Sashi Prabhu December 31, 2011 at 4:10 AM thanks a million

Robert Pettit December 29, 2011 at 5:58 PM Nice set of rhyming couplets. Congratulations on winning with this entry. Sashi Prabhu December 31, 2011 at 4:11 AM thank you verry much for the kind words of appreciation

Audrey Haick December 29, 2011 at 5:37 PM My congratulations on a fine win, Sashi! Each new Year is indeed a new begining and a blessing. Whatever it brings we can take it because we know there is Light. Wishing you a Happy New Year! Love, Annalise Sashi Prabhu December 31, 2011 at 4:11 AM thank you very much