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My Piece of Mind a New Begining

4th December 2011 ,sernabatim,Gois shack, By Sashi .Prabhu(ZEAUOXIAN) Calm waters come engulf my scorching mind, Pour yourself in through my eyes, burning embers find. Fumes of devilish sorrows, be engulfed so fast, Peace to look forward to, wash away memories of the past. Tranquility drench your serenity into me, Happiness corrode my skin and char it with peace to be. Entwine your auric wings of joys around my heart, Ooze from it pink flames, so darkness depart. Edify myself with joys of life darkness gone , light piercing through like a sharp prudish knife. Welcome to my body all joys and peace, Let it override the ebbing currents dwindle and decrease. a new year dawns a new begining, i will take it on my chin...... placement: third, contest:show me any form/any theme max 15 lines, sponsor: Brian Strand.

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Date: 3/10/2012 12:42:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Sashi. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/7/2012 9:24:00 PM
congrats Sashi on another exciting win for this electrifying write luv..
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Date: 3/7/2012 4:31:00 PM
congrats on your contest win; an intriguing mix of images, bright with the hope of a new beginning and the dawning of a new era :-)
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Date: 3/7/2012 11:00:00 AM
Good afternoon and congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "3rd place wins Only" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:12:00 AM
SASHI,,.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/7/2012 10:15:00 AM
the thrill of putting up my work in your contest is always a joy........~sashi
Date: 3/2/2012 9:56:00 PM
SASHI..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/4/2012 6:23:00 PM
thank you... you r kind...........~sashi
Date: 1/11/2012 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/7/2012 8:42:00 AM
thank you Carol
Date: 1/10/2012 10:39:00 PM
Wow. Very nice. Congratulations Sashi
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/7/2012 8:42:00 AM
thanks Bob
Date: 1/10/2012 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations Sashi. Love, Joyce
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/7/2012 8:44:00 AM
thanks Joyce
Date: 1/6/2012 11:36:00 AM
An excellent write Prabhu!Congratulations on your win.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 1/7/2012 5:49:00 AM
a million thanks for the wishes...pl call me sashi
Date: 1/6/2012 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations Sashi on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 1/7/2012 5:49:00 AM
thank you Jon..
Date: 1/6/2012 9:33:00 AM
It flows well with such beauty. Enjoyed !! Congrats on placement in the contest !!! Well deserved !!
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 1/7/2012 5:50:00 AM
thanks Debra for the wishes....
Date: 1/6/2012 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any Top Twenty" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 1/6/2012 7:46:00 AM
thank you very much
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 1/6/2012 7:39:00 AM
thank you very much
Date: 1/5/2012 7:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "New Beginnings" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 1/5/2012 10:16:00 AM
thank you very much Carol
Date: 12/30/2011 10:36:00 AM
Very interesting imagery, Sashi, Congratulations on your win with this creative poem.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 12/31/2011 4:10:00 AM
thank you very much. season's greetings to you from Goa,India.
Date: 12/30/2011 2:07:00 AM
Congraulations x
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 12/31/2011 4:10:00 AM
thanks a million
Date: 12/29/2011 5:58:00 PM
Nice set of rhyming couplets. Congratulations on winning with this entry.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 12/31/2011 4:11:00 AM
thank you verry much for the kind words of appreciation
Date: 12/29/2011 5:37:00 PM
My congratulations on a fine win, Sashi! Each new Year is indeed a new begining and a blessing. Whatever it brings we can take it because we know there is Light. Wishing you a Happy New Year! Love, Annalise
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 12/31/2011 4:11:00 AM
thank you very much

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