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My Pets- Nursery Rhyme

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Tito is my cute little friend He is none other than a dachshund He guards our yard and our little home And around the house, does merrily roam He barks when strangers come When barking, he sounds like a hollow drum He growls when he sees Kitty cat But wags his tail at my sight Tito, my dog, and Kitty my cat Each of them is our beloved pet Sad, they are never friends and always fight Snarling and growling at each other’s sight Of all her feed, Kitty loves milk Her fur is tawny and soft as silk Tito with sleek waist and drooping ears Always prefers to roam outdoors We bring them up with tender care Though often fight, they are a charming pair Without them life will be quite dull Both, in our hearts, we fondly cuddle November.3. 2022 ~Placed First~ Be Creative- Poetry Contest Sponsor- Eve Roper

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Date: 11/22/2022 11:56:00 PM
Beautiful and delightful children's rhyme my dear friend Valsa. Congratulations on your first place win! Thanks for sharing. God bless. Hugs
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Date: 11/22/2022 11:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Valsa :)
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Date: 11/21/2022 10:16:00 PM
Cute Dog-cat rhyme. Message of care for pets is intertwined. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/21/2022 8:07:00 PM
Valsa , thank you for entering the contest. I love your very creative children nursery poem. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you and yours. Hugs & Love Eve
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Date: 11/22/2022 3:05:00 AM
It is my turn to thank you Eve for conducting this contest and picking up my poem for a swin. Thanks a lot !
Date: 11/3/2022 11:23:00 AM
Just another couple airing their differences . . . .Aloha!
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Date: 11/3/2022 6:24:00 AM
- A lovely couple, Valsa ... best friends - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 11/3/2022 5:28:00 AM
Such heartfelt descriptions of your loving pets, Valsa! I see them frolicking everywhere through your wonderful imagery. Best to you.
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Date: 11/3/2022 2:45:00 AM
They become part of the family Valsa, an enjoyable verse. Good luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 11/3/2022 1:54:00 AM
Alas I have no place for pets. Your poem is fabulous.
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