Ralph Sergi Poet Rhyme

My Pet Beast

I make sure my pet is on a leash
The size of my pet is beyond belief
You’ll need a giant scoop just to curb it right
And muzzle its mouth or it just might
Devour my neighbor with delight

5 lines or less Skat A Contest
November 1, 2015

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Cona Adams November 23, 2015 at 10:48 AM Too cute. Love the humor! Ralph Sergi November 23, 2015 at 11:15 AM Hi Cona: Thanks for the comment.

Edlynn Nau November 14, 2015 at 5:17 PM Yeah! This won! BALLOONS & NOISE MAKERS. It's fun isn't it? Congratulations to you Ralph! Edlynn Nau November 14, 2015 at 9:51 PM Oh it has enough! I see the beast. It's huge and ALL TEETH. I see him well enough to know that I'd cross the street if I met him. Ralph Sergi November 14, 2015 at 7:38 PM Thank you, Edlynne. I was afraid for awhile because it didn't have enough imagery.

Paul Callus November 11, 2015 at 2:25 PM Pleased to be back with congratulations, Ralph...well done!! // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 8, 2015 at 9:44 PM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Ralph!

Janice Canerdy November 8, 2015 at 1:44 PM Ralph, this well-written poem satisfied my hunger for a little wicked humor! LOL Congrats on your win. Janice

Constance La France November 8, 2015 at 12:17 PM Ralph congratulations on your placement with this amazing write

Alexis Y. November 7, 2015 at 11:40 PM Ralph, congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Michael Tor November 7, 2015 at 10:34 PM lol a nice win Ralph. Ralph Sergi November 8, 2015 at 7:42 AM Thank you, Michael

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2015 at 8:19 PM I see it got a win. BIG congrats to you. Ralph Sergi November 8, 2015 at 7:43 AM Thank you, Andrea.

Skat A November 7, 2015 at 6:22 PM Ralph, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT

Eileen Manassian November 5, 2015 at 2:12 PM :) Cute write....I don't know....it gave a subtle hint of a double meaning to me. ;) Good luck in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux November 5, 2015 at 8:55 AM I think he is a refreshing change from Steven Harper. Time will tell of course, I will wait to determine my final verdict.

Richard Lamoureux November 5, 2015 at 7:53 AM Ha ha, a fun one Ralph! Eileen Manassian November 5, 2015 at 2:11 PM He is good looking! That's all the matters, right? ;) Ralph Sergi November 5, 2015 at 8:51 AM Hi Richard: Thanks, What do you think of the new PM of Canada?

Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2015 at 7:02 AM - :)))) ..... Sounds like my dog ..... she does not like my neighbor (a husky dog .... big) - Great poem, Ralph !!! - Luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ralph Sergi November 5, 2015 at 8:52 AM Thank you ,Anne Lise, I had a big dog once.

Ralph Sergi November 3, 2015 at 6:46 AM Thank you, Olive for sharing.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 3, 2015 at 6:40 AM Weee somewhat a ironic here!! but clever seen particularly in the last line =`) like the third line!~Olive Eloisa

Andrea Dietrich November 2, 2015 at 3:56 PM You went the humorous route. I enjoyed this, RAlph.

Cherl Dunn November 1, 2015 at 5:26 PM Dear Ralph This sounds like my dream dog, a bull masstive just love this drooling bred, love this creative write big beasts rule the universe if you ask me, lol and thanks for your comment on my scary carrie I wrote it for a friend at work at the last minute, cheri Ralph Sergi November 1, 2015 at 5:31 PM Hi Cheri, Thank you. I'm sure you'll agreed me that last minute poems are the best. After seeing SKAT'S photo, it reminded me of a pet and I quickly wrote this poem.

Nette Onclaud November 1, 2015 at 3:52 PM heeding your warning, ralph... is this something that happened to you?.. very nice!.. huggs Ralph Sergi November 1, 2015 at 4:21 PM Hi nette, Thank you. I had a Rotweiler once.

Paul Callus November 1, 2015 at 2:55 PM Those beasts on a leash have inspired you well, Ralph! gl in the contest. Regards // paul Ralph Sergi November 1, 2015 at 4:23 PM Hi Paul, Thank you. The photo reminded me of a pet I once had.

Mark Woods November 1, 2015 at 11:05 AM lol, those creature sure need a leash! An entertaining write.