My Perfect Lover

Five thousand years before the sky was introduced with the sea
It was at that time, that God wrote your name adjacent to me
Even before the stars were chosen to give the Light
It was at that time, that God choses your face to make my day bright

In the journey of love, we were two souls, searching for one another
Fate was against us, time was our enemy,yet God was the writer of our tale 
And one day I caught a glimpse of you, that lovely face hiding behind a veil
It was at that exact moment, that I became your secret lover

For it was the first time that I heard my heart beating
It was restless for you, and everyday for you I prayed
Permeating through the sunlight, gliding through shade
I met you in junction and the time stopped due to our meeting

Both of us were sitting on the station of fate
Totally unaware of our future and the hearts filled with dejected pains
we decided to alter our destiny by sitting on a mutual train
God is the witness that during the journey we fell in love and became desperate

For I was never a poet, neither was I ever good with words
It was the feeling of love that I started to notice the melody of the birds
It was your beauty which tempted me to write
Your angelic looking eyes and it were your hairs which kept me awake during nights


For In heaven, God made everyone perfect lovers
But we were lucky to find each other in this world
For Five thousand years before the sky was introduced with the sea
It was at that time that God wrote your name adjacent to me

22 December 2018
For the contest"Marathon Mile 2"
Sponsor" Mark Toney"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 9/6/2020 8:31:00 AM
great poem! 5000 years of romance! people don't last 5 months these days!! Marvellous thoughts brilliantly expresed!
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Date: 1/14/2019 5:35:00 PM
ohhh, a splendor of a poem. truly soulful, faraz... huggs
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Date: 1/14/2019 8:24:00 AM
Faraz! This is wonderful! :) xomo
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Date: 1/5/2019 1:30:00 PM
Hello Faraz,this poem I just read made me feel joy. Like Funom said this poem does have wisdom written here. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/5/2019 9:53:00 AM
I wish this can be converted to a song and a copy within my reach. You've started the new year with great power and wisdom. This is beautiful, so beautiful to feel beautiful underrates it. Happy 2019
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Date: 1/5/2019 8:09:00 AM
Nicely done! Love the last two lines! For Five thousand years before the sky was introduced with the sea It was at that time that God wrote your name adjacent to me Take Care!
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Date: 12/30/2018 4:40:00 PM
Five thousand years before the sky was introduced with the sea It was at that time, that God wrote your name adjacent to me ----- is so deep
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Date: 12/27/2018 3:29:00 AM
What a thrilling rendition of a story of love!.. Two lovers answering the call of fate.. lovers meant for each other who would find peace and harmony.. A brilliant throb of the heart and a masterful penning of an adept poet! A win and a FAV. Best regards. God bless you Faraz.
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Date: 12/24/2018 10:30:00 AM
Quite the marathon my friend...very well crafted Faraz...have yourself a wonderful holiday season and Merry Christmas...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 12/23/2018 10:00:00 PM
The romance of your poem takes my breath away, Faraz. A deep and meaningful piece of finding a perfect love. I was captured by the imagination of your first two lines and the emotional beauty of this piece. A shining poetic gem that glows with your talent, my friend. Warmest wishes for a joyous holiday season.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/23/2018 2:28:00 PM
I love everything about this poem Faraz! Love inspires us to become poets. So true. Your romantic story gave me such joy to read this morning. Happy holidays my friend. This gem is going into my faves! xxoo : )
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Date: 12/23/2018 11:23:00 AM
Ahhh!! So romantic. Reads like a good contender in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:36:00 AM
Faraz, wow what a romantic and dreamy write, I loved every word of it and it is a winner to me and a fav too ~
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:17:00 AM
I love how you circled back around to the initial lines, God wrote your name adjacent to mine. The eternal circle of love!! Great theme and depth in your writing.
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:49:00 AM
a poem heaven sent, faraz...love is a choice knighted by God...have a joyous christmas...am so glad you dropped by; thanks!... huggs
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Date: 12/22/2018 11:53:00 PM
I don't agree. You choose your love. God does not direct. Best wishes to find your perfect match.
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Date: 12/22/2018 6:35:00 PM
What a lovely poem, Faraz. Sometimes I, too, wonder if our fates have been predetermined. What else could account for love at first sight? And being in love certainly does awaken the senses to the beauty of nature. Enjoyed your poem! Best wishes for the holiday season, Carolyn
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Date: 12/22/2018 4:42:00 PM
Very satisfying reading. A very nice love writing.
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Date: 12/22/2018 12:50:00 PM
You are writing like a prophet of love...You can never go wrong with such a style...
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Date: 12/22/2018 12:02:00 AM
Wow so poetic and imaginative, admirable romantics . A charming love poem . Kudos for the rhyming as well. Soo nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do check out my newest poem too. The way to greet each other as poets neh
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Date: 12/21/2018 2:56:00 PM
This is a briliant poem Faraz, so romantic, a perfect love, created by God.. A talented young poet you are...
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Date: 12/21/2018 2:22:00 PM
Never can go wrong..when God chooses your mate! A lovely romantic tale, Faraz. Best for a win.
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