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My Pendulous Heart

Within the subtle soundless silence There exist echoes of a lingering loud My pendulous heart decrees in defiance Such emotions plundered and ploughed Like a geocentric giant guillotine My lamenting love sacrificially sliced My soul slaved in the Enigma machine Where dreams are deceptively diced The loving light battles the darkest day And sorrows surrender at portals gate For love barely escapes the submissive sway Marauding memories reminisce and recreate Stained surreal abiding accumulative art A priceless painting of my Pendulous Heart. May.20.2017 Pendulum of Time and Place - Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 6/13/2017 5:48:00 PM
Smooth, very deep and laced so beautifully with exceptional images. A painting from the mind's eye and the heart's true path.. Can not get much better than that! Super ten and fav my friend.
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Date: 6/6/2017 8:06:00 AM
You did a tremendous job, I'm glad I dropped by this morning. Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 6/5/2017 2:40:00 PM
WW, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/5/2017 9:16:00 AM
This is indeed a priceless painting of your pendulous heart. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Your words come straight from the heart and touch me. A lot of personal and probably painful emotion has gone into this poem and that makes it sad, beautiful and very valuable. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 5/20/2017 4:31:00 PM
Dreams deceptively diced, great alliteration, think this will do well in Kai's contest, he likes these cerebral offerings!
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Date: 5/20/2017 2:14:00 PM
wonderful alliteration in your sonnet ^WW^ good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/20/2017 1:20:00 PM
"And sorrows surrender at portals gate" that's my favorite line, Some nice alliteration WW.
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