My Passionate Write

How I long to hold you 
Close in my arms
Press kisses to your cheek
And enfold you near to my heart

Run a warm bath 
And bath you tenderly
Pat you dry gently
Lie you down between 

Soft fluffy warm sheets
Lie close to your body
After you have been amply
Fed the food of life for tummy

To protect you from all strife
I can't go there or do those
Magical acts
Just my prayer today 

For God to send someone
In my place to see that 
These wonderful acts of humanity
Are carried out for you...

(The passion of my heart for all hurting, hungry, and neglected children of the world..)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/13/2010 4:12:00 AM
Marry me!. Please. lol I don't know or care what else you have going on, but I want to marry you now, so I thought I would put that out there lol... Such talent, I get passionate about anything that has to do with children, you should read my poem "Emily" and see why. That little girl changed me for the better. I love this piece!!! It just made me propose to you...that's how incredible this is... Wow.. GREAT
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Date: 7/25/2010 1:37:00 PM
u're a gem of a person! A very thoughtful write abt the underprivileged. Thanks for ur comments...Unfortunately ASH is my beloved. I ain't her beloved.
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Date: 7/18/2010 1:44:00 PM
I really liked this one !
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Date: 7/17/2010 11:09:00 AM
It shows the passionate heart inside you Sara, it's a lovely poem >> James
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Date: 7/17/2010 3:26:00 AM
Filled with passion and caring. wonderful write... always Michael
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Date: 7/15/2010 4:55:00 PM
loved this!..im always happy to read poetry with such a wonderful direction!
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Date: 7/12/2010 12:50:00 PM
A beauteous write so caring and full of human love.. enjoyed your precious words Sara.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:16:00 AM
sweet poem!! great job!!
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Date: 7/12/2010 3:56:00 AM
An amazing write Sara dear. Touched me deeply. Thanks for your comments,
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Date: 7/12/2010 3:18:00 AM
You have a very well-matured voice. I like how you lead into stanzas by using the last line as a link ;) likeee it. In song, MIKE RUFF
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Date: 7/12/2010 1:39:00 AM
Such a heartfelt write Sara, these children definitely need all the love that they can get-- God bless you for writing such a moving poem-- btw just one typo for "bathe"-- L2S2 --hope this helps :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:45:00 PM
Compassion like this a gift from god Sara.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:22:00 PM
sad, and very sweet, so touching. some children are even homeless. a beautiful write, Sara. have a wonderful night to yourself. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/11/2010 6:33:00 PM
Beautifully written. It's an outstanding poem. Loves Destiny
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Date: 7/11/2010 6:31:00 PM
very touching!
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:16:00 AM
A well written tribute to all charity in the world, well done, Sara! Yes, I observed ducks feeding on algae, although I was also niot so sure about that before!....Gert
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:48:00 AM
AMEN for all the caregivers of this world. I know exactly how you feel. I know my heart hurts everyday for the sick, the hungry and especially children of the world. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/11/2010 7:32:00 AM
There is such beauty and compassion in this poem. Thank God for the lovely people in this world who are the care givers. Nice poem, Sara! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/11/2010 7:09:00 AM
Good morning Sara, now that os much better. Heavy on the passion God gives us don't you think. A wonderful and powerful write,..p.d.
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