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'my Parting Gifts'

 
~*~ My last day was not me knocking on Heaven's gate, But a bus pulled up to my home, that was my fate; Told to leave three pieces of advice and to be precise, And men in suits said, be quick, we cannot wait. You will not be coming back, so you best be concise, To your loved left behind, say things that entice; I said, my dears, think of me, but let go of grieving, No time for any packing, only time for some insight. I have learned my dears, to never stop dreaming, A bus is waiting and slow now is my breathing; The time has come and soon the clock will chime, Oh, keep dreaming and things you will be weaving. The bus will take me to the golden steps I must climb, I go, leaving all my worldly things, oh what a crime; I said, don't let seeking money be your only happiness, In a moment, I will be up above and in Heaven 's shine. Let go of grief and recall me with great tenderness, Keep dreaming and you will never know emptiness; Told to leave three pieces of advice and be precise, Money, can at times bring your life only nastiness. ____________________________ February 8, 2016 Poetry/Rubiayat/'My Parting Gifts Copyright Protected, ID 16-754-720-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, My Parting Gifts, sponsor, Viv Wigley First Place
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Scars Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Broken Wings, just gorgeous as always lovely lady congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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September 2, 2016 at 4:27 PM
So wonderful to share the winners’ list with your great poetry..Congrats on awesome work..Sara
Kimathi Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 8:33 AM
I always love your deep, emotional poems.... Congrats BW, for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-)
Sage Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 8:06 AM
you've given great gifts to those that were left in this poem, your imagination has created this wonderful poem...best of luck in the contest
La France Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Sage, thanks for the visit and the wonderful, appreciate !
Inman Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Lovely piece, BW.
La France Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:51 AM
James, thanks for visiting with the lovely !
Manassian Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 7:08 PM
I love this form, dear. You have used it well to convey your thoughts on this difficult theme. I love how you brought the advice to the forefront. Beautiful...good luck in the contest.
La France Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 7:56 PM
Eileen, thanks for visiting my poem and for the beautiful ~
Manassian Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Thanks for your comment on my blog, dear.
Turner Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 6:28 AM
Very beautiful, B.W. You are just way too talented. I look forward to seeing you in the winner's circle.
La France Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Daniel, thanks for visiting and that nice comment, sometimes these contests can be tricky, one never knows what the result will be .
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 5:06 AM
- A beautiful poem, B. W. - Good luck in the contest, it will be a winning poems .... believe my words :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Anne Lise, thanks for the beautiful and the encouragement and support and the hugs :)
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