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The time has come for me to say goodbye forever I am not brilliant at expressing my emotions But in the words of ‘Sealion Dion’ …. ‘I will always love you’ If you check in the filing cabinet You will find my portfolio of shares I have kept the Woolworth's certificate it may be valuable They may resurface one day …. That’s the wonder of Woolies! If you ever need a new sofa…. don’t forget these immortal words The DFS Half Price Sale starts at 10am on Boxing Day! Contest:- My Parting Gifts Sponsor:- Viv Wigley 02~06~16

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Date: 9/10/2016 5:25:00 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/2/2016 5:26:00 PM
you never cease to make me smile, congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/2/2016 5:48:00 PM
I thought Viv would appreciate the very British humour here LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/14/2016 6:10:00 AM
Nice tongue-in-cheek touch in this one, Jan.
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Date: 2/14/2016 6:54:00 AM
It is very 'British' humour I hope it catches Mr Viv's eye:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/9/2016 5:25:00 PM
The title scared me but after reading am all smiles. Plus its just for contest, nicely done!
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:27:00 PM
Thanks Njeri and i love the new avatar:-) hugs jan xxx
Date: 2/8/2016 7:03:00 AM
Full of wit and humor, Viv's forte. He should like this a lot.
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Date: 2/8/2016 2:45:00 PM
I hope so James am not sure everyone will understand the jokes but I hope Viv likes it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/7/2016 11:04:00 AM
You paint the scene before you with great skill and imagination using humor as your brush. Emile.
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:06:00 AM
I love to try and write with humour Emile - if this situation was real i have no idea what I would really say - perish the thought it should ever happen:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/7/2016 10:36:00 AM
Made me smile, Jan. Great take on the theme! All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:05:00 AM
Thanks Sandra I wasn't sure if the humour would be appreciated by those not from the UK:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/6/2016 10:09:00 PM
i enjoyed your take on the theme, it made me giggle a few times! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 2/7/2016 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Sandra I think it will appeal to the British humour and Viv the sponsor is British lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/6/2016 8:59:00 PM
Sad to know you are leaving, but wherever you go please take my memories with you...nice read JAN ALLISON
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Date: 2/7/2016 7:13:00 AM
I'm not leaving Carlton its just a contest write:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/6/2016 7:25:00 PM
Loved this but I sure hope are you not leaving! If you gonna be dead please send us a schedule, you know the times you will be dead and the times you will be alive again!! :) Hugs
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Date: 2/7/2016 7:13:00 AM
LOL thankfully I don't know the schedule ... if I did i would be on a desert island somewhere :-) But for now I am going no where:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/6/2016 6:27:00 PM
I can imagine Viv loving this creative entry Jan. I thought it was great! #7
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Connie the humour is very British I just hope Viv likes it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/6/2016 5:28:00 PM
Oh this is truly original, Jan! You are very loving and altruistic:) This is the type of wit which will appeal to our friend Viv!! Hugs // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/6/2016 5:50:00 PM
No problem about N/As...you're in good company:)
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Date: 2/6/2016 5:31:00 PM
I wrote it specifically to appeal to Viv's sense of humour ...I'm not sure other's will understand the very British humour here - I hope Viv likes it or it's another N/A for the ever growing collection:-) hugs Jan xxx
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