My Paradise

I stopped awhile, to rest my legs, and spied a crevice in the wall where mossy stones, and flagstones, lost, are hidden in the vines I'm quite intrigued, so I must squeeze, and curl myself into a twig and soon, I've found my way inside, where sun shines down in amber light A garden hidden, tucked away, I have found beyond the other side Beneath the trees are wild bouquets, a thousand blossoms dancing, bright They flaunt their beauty to the sky, seducing blackbirds gliding low Filling senses, restoring souls, keeping secrets no one knows Yellow buckwheat at my feet, while lavender, soft essence, sweet, Each wild thing fragile on the stem, will bend and bow to every breeze I will sit beside the climbing rose, and take my rest against the wall and hear a song of meadowlark, embellish stories of the years This lovely place is mine to own, watered, fed by pearls of dew Where song birds sing, and robins nest, I wonder who may know of this Were I to share my secret lair, perhaps it would not be so fair Although it's not of mine to own, my paradise, I cannot share
_______________________________________________________ For Nette's Secret Garden Contest Carrie Richards 2/19/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gorelick Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Such a place to find would be devine. I loved this Carrie. Congrats. BG
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 7:32 PM
Carrie thank you for taking me to your secret garden in verse. I truly enjoyed the amazing journey you've so marvelously brought to life in your write. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
May Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 8:02 AM
Congrats on a fine win
Mehta Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 3:43 AM
Fine view of lovely garden and congrats on the win, carrie
Jones Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Congratulations Carrie on a beautiful win
Van Akkeren Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 5:50 PM
I love reading your work Carrie. It flows so well and paints such a splendid picture, each word and sentence so well chosen. Your work is inspirational. Well done and congrats on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 4:40 PM
Makes me want to go for a walk with you! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Flach Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 3:23 PM
Beautiful, Carrie! It reads as a free verse with well hidden and subtle rhyme - almost hidden like the garden itself. Free verse with a flow and rhythm that is easy to read and calming to the soul. Nicely done. And ... the last three words of your poem are false - you did share it rather well, I think.
Onclaud Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 3:12 PM
the intimacy of your images is impressively subtle yet inviting... congrats on your top spot in my contest, carrie.. huggs
Paras Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 3:32 PM
I like the storytelling quality of it, and the emotions that go with it. A personal, intimate poem!
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