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VOICE: AHMAD RAZVI

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I move, I move, My wheels turn like wild things My hands cry the rims I run in my dreams I jump with style I dance I move, and dance My eyes sing like sopranos My mouth uses color Like a rainbow Behind me I run I run and I run The drip lines in my arm Are parachute ropes I steer them alone To land here I stand I dream, I dream Nothing keeps my mind Inside my faltering Little loving body With dancing Writing pen *** January 13, 2017

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Date: 1/14/2017 4:14:00 AM
I know how modest you are but I have to say it. Talent, talent, and more talent, my friend, Duir!
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Darren White
Date: 1/14/2017 4:24:00 AM
Awww Budgie :) Thank you.
Date: 1/14/2017 2:33:00 AM
What is life but a free fall that each one of us enjoys in his own unique way? Pleasure to read. Enjoyed the ride!
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Darren White
Date: 1/14/2017 3:07:00 AM
Thank you so much! And what a ride it is :)
Date: 1/13/2017 10:41:00 PM
Interesting, creative images in your beautiful poem!
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Darren White
Date: 1/14/2017 12:37:00 AM
Agnes, thank you :)
Date: 1/13/2017 10:29:00 PM
Let's skydive!!! I don't do it in ages.. ;) Dreaming keep us alive, Darren... this is a great poem, loved it :*
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Darren White
Date: 1/15/2017 1:52:00 AM
We'll scream together then, I am afraid of heights too LOLOL
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/14/2017 7:20:00 AM
Hummm no promises about the screaming... specially since I'm scared of highs!!! Lol
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Darren White
Date: 1/14/2017 12:37:00 AM
KK Clau, you can sit on my lap when we do. Just don't start screaming in my ears ;)
Date: 1/13/2017 1:55:00 PM
This was great my friend. Let nothing at all hold you back, just go for it and have fun in the process. Really nice Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 1/13/2017 2:00:00 PM
Nothing will stop me, the world inside my head is vast and limitless Thank you my friend :)
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