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My Paper Boats

Let not my paper Boats get drenched in the subtle Droplets of dancing shower. Let them sail over The drinking beck, that streams down, The thirsty gullet of sod. ©1582016

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/12/2017 10:26:00 AM

Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.

Nayanika Dey
Date: 7/27/2017 12:45:00 PM

Tons of thanks to you for such words of appraisal!

Joseph May

Date: 7/7/2017 10:35:00 PM

Beautifully penned Nayanika..best wishes

Nayanika Dey
Date: 7/8/2017 1:28:00 AM

Thanks a lot, dear Joseph!