Sandra Haight Poet Ottava rima

Notes About The Poem

_{^{~2nd Place~
Contest: Form O - Only One
Theme: Otherworldly
Sponsor: Broken Wings, Judged: 05/21/2017}}

My Otherworldly Place

Beyond those doors, an otherworldly place

presents the quietude of souls at rest;

another world, in time that I will face,

behind that marble wall, inside my nest.

So quiet and serene, this sacred space

this mausoleum, safe from earth's unrest,

where souls observe their outer emptiness

safeguarding them in otherworldliness.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Constance La France May 22, 2017 at 8:40 AM Sandra congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem and i like the image too Sandra Haight May 23, 2017 at 3:53 PM Thank you, Constance, for another inspiring contest, uplifting comment and for my wonderful placement in your contest. Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong May 7, 2017 at 11:40 PM This is fantastic Sandra! Impressive work that should fair very well. 7 ; ) Sandra Haight May 8, 2017 at 6:53 PM Thank you, Connie, for your uplifting comment and 7 rating. I so much appreciate your support! Hugs, Sandra

Joseph May May 7, 2017 at 7:33 PM The mystery of the great beyond...Great write Sandra Sandra Haight May 7, 2017 at 7:38 PM Thank you, Joseph. I so much appreciate your visits and support. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2017 at 12:03 PM Fantastic writing in this form, Sandra. CAn't wait to try it myself!! Sandra Haight May 7, 2017 at 6:27 PM Thank you, Andrea, for the positive comment. It is a nice form to work with. Hugs, Sandra