My One True Love

 
Have I ever told you that I love you still, though you are now a name engraved in stone; our love has no bounds and is everlasting, you will always be my one true love. I assumed we would grow old together, but your destiny was written in the book of life; and what is written can never be changed, so, you had to leave me one frozen winter day. Years have passed but the dagger of grief remains, I come with red roses to your grave; not often as you are buried in another city. as an only child, it was your mom and dad's wish. No matter, you are with me each day and night, but I must get on with my life, it is time; so I have come to tell you that one day soon, another will claim my heart and soul and mind. Though, you my darling will always and forever, be my one true love, never to be repeated; never to be replaced by another love, and when my life ends- meet me at heaven's gate. ________________________ November 4, 2020 Poetry/Verse/My One True Love Copyright Protected, ID 11-1300-228-04 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard Contest, Have I Ever Told You That sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 11/20/20 Eighth Place
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Brul Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 3:10 AM
My eyes got welled-up on this magnificent piece..Each word, each line speaks a thousand loneliness...Very heart-piercing.. You have so much to pour out dear Heart! A FAVE...Congratulations..
La France Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 4:15 AM
JCB, thank you so much for your compassion, yes, there will always be that lingering loneliness in my soul, and thanks for the congratulations and the FAV _Constance
Seeker Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 6:45 AM
Soul touching! Congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Seeker, thank you for the compassion and congratulations _Constance
Lawless Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 6:31 AM
A beautifully poignant poetic expression of the pain and doubt of life's choices. thanks for entering the contest Constance
La France Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 7:51 AM
John, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my placement, appreciate _Constance
Fowler Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Sweet Constance. Congratulations on the win! Linda
La France Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Linda, thank you for visiting with the sweet and for the congratulations _Constance
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November 21, 2020 at 2:07 AM
I'm sorry for your loss, and the difficult journey to lay flowers at his grave, but I believe as you stated in your poem, that he will be with you, where ever you are. Thank you for sharing your heart. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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November 21, 2020 at 7:53 AM
Joanna, thank you for the lovely comment and the congratulations _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 3:44 PM
It's so tragic, your love story, Constance. You wrote incredibly well about it here. The same happened to Carolyn too with her husband leaving her a widow long before their time could be.
La France Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 7:34 AM
Andrea, thank you for the compassion and compliment, yes, for sure I am not alone in this grief _Constance
Romios Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 12:00 PM
A marvelous work! I can relate to this well. Life took our husbands too soon. No. They cannot be replaced. I still am married to him Pangiex
La France Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 7:35 AM
Panagiota, thank you for the compliment on my poem, I am sure many women can relate, yes our husbands died too young, I always say to friend I am in love with a ghost _Constance
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November 4, 2020 at 2:36 PM
Hello beautiful, hope you’re doing fabulous:) anywho, what a true love filled with emotions. I’m many can relate to. Beautifully said, just like you :)
La France Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 3:57 AM
Kina, thank you so much for the beautiful and the compliment, it means a lot to me _Constance
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November 4, 2020 at 11:17 AM
Hello Conatance La France, this peom is beautifully written. I read this poem over 2 . I like the last two verse the best, Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 9:45 AM
Hello Constance, you are welcome. enjoy your day my friend.
La France Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 3:58 AM
Darlene, thank you so much for your kindness _Constance
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 4:01 PM
Hello Constance, emotions are good to get out when writing poetry. You feel better now? Enjoy your evening my friend.
La France Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 2:11 PM
Darlene, thank you for compliment on my poem and for reading 2 times, I like those verses too, the poem was very emotional to write _Constance
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November 4, 2020 at 8:05 AM
- A poem written with "blood from your heart", Constance - Beautiful - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 2:12 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you for the beautiful and hugs, yes my heart truly did bleed these words _Constance
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