My Old Town

Though I’ve walked these streets
To one block or another 
I never saw what was
Laid down under
I saw some old photos today
That took my breath away 
A place I never knew 
A place I never stayed 
I saw hills and farms 
In place of these busy streets 
I saw people in black 
And butchers selling meat 
And the way to travel 
Was horse and buggy
There were roads of dirt 
And some that were pretty muddy 
Buildings that once housed a movie theater
That is no longer here 
Buildings that sold straw, and hay and beer
Streetcars that ran on wires 
Hang up there  
The faces on many looked so worn gray 
Most of the families worked so hard 
To bring this town to what it is 
Today  
I saw historical monuments 
Of the famous people that passed by
I saw the faces of children
With excitement in there eyes
As they stood celebrating a parade or fair
They were all happy just hanging around here
I must say I am fascinated by what I saw 
To see my old town this way really put me in awe
So now I see how streets and buildings got their names  
And I will continue to walk in this town 
Never viewing it quite the same

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 4/8/2009 10:37:00 AM
Nice write. This is great, I wish I could see my rundown town back in the day, maybe I would apreciate it more. idk...thank you for this cute write =) ~Jese
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Date: 9/9/2008 5:40:00 AM
Laura, so sorry I ever missed this. Figures our dear Tom would catch it. Warmest congrats my friend on your Honorable Mention in Rhea's contest! Excellent write! Love, Shar
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