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My Old Jalopy

There's no horn or radio The heater and air is broke, Paint faded with some chipping off Been told it even has a bad choke. Tire's are all worn even the donut tire Around every corner they squeal, Exhaust drags with some parts missing There defently is no real car appeal. The transmission slips in gear No more is there get up and go, I must leave early to get to work For my old worn car goes so slow. Wobble down to get to the store Many people just stand and stare, Others shake their heads and snicker Wondering how i ever made it there. There are no more payments on it The insurance is cheap too, I'll drive it until it fully quits Then ill buy another one new.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 10/9/2009 2:52:00 AM
Jodie, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 10/7/2009 8:24:00 PM
I got a kick out of this one! Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your featured write! Milt
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Date: 10/6/2009 7:17:00 AM
you are a kindred spirit, I have a 12 year old honda crv, and I still love it, it is paid for and rides good.
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Date: 10/5/2009 4:22:00 PM
Like the attitude of the person that has this featured poem this week. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/5/2009 12:58:00 PM
Sounds like an old car we used to have. Like the humorous way you approach this tale. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 10/5/2009 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature poem this week Jodie >> James
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:39:00 AM
Great job, and fun to read. Congratulations on this being featured this week!~ Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2009 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jodie. Love, Carol
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