Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Free verse

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WANDERING WAYFARER Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

No. of Syllables: 45

Date: 23-10-2025

 

MY OLD HOMETOWN

A trip to hometown
A bonafide power booster
Enthrals heart with nostalgia
Smiles and greets; chats with mates
Fests and fairs till late nights
Miss all and mess up with daily chores
Bygone sweet days!

Place: 4th

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Andrea Dietrich October 26, 2025 at 11:55 PM Lovely. Big congrats for your win Patri Venkata Ramana October 27, 2025 at 4:02 AM Very glad to receive your compliments

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2025 at 6:51 AM - Memories of the time that was ... lovely poem, Patri :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs Patri Venkata Ramana October 27, 2025 at 4:01 AM Thank you so much for the best compliments.

Reason A. Poteet October 26, 2025 at 5:03 AM A good remembrance of the olden days - when you were younger. I have a feeling from line six, you were there on a specific purpose which took some time to settle and interfered with "fun". Congats! Patri Venkata Ramana October 27, 2025 at 4:00 AM Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my verse.