My Old Blue Suedes

Vintage sneaks, with character, for sale.
Its just come time to get a new pair.

Many adventures these shoes have been through.
Yet they still wear as comfy as new.

They look sharp dressed up or dressed down.
Hope and optimism are automatic when worn.

Their simple and classic.
Abundant in style.
Even The King wore them awhile.

Sold to an owner whom appreciates quality.
Knowing these shoes will make him happy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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March 19, 2018 at 10:46 PM
Hi Carmine, was curious to see which poem was urs, after I'd gone through the contest completely, and am writing to tell u that, even though ur poem didn't place, it was placed in the top 14... great write, i enjoyed it heaps and it's pretty much by chance that it didn't place higher, i couldn't differentiate between the top 14 really. cheers
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