My Offerings To My Lord

(Inspired by 'Gitanjali' by Nobel Laureate Rabindranath Tagore) 

In the seamless sea of eternity, when life's hassles churn my mind, my Lord, 
and a note of discord creeps into the soft rhythm of it's calm waves,
in devotion, I close my faithful eyes, to see Your formless form:
a lustre, mystic, from gems precious flashes on my mind's eyes
and I get a glimpse of those radiant gems: love and peace 
as they slowly arise from my mind's seabed, through its billows. 

I let these gems to dwell and sparkle in my mind -
I feel love and peace...

When my mind wandered in the pitch darkness of ignorance, 
You gave me the insight to see the light of my own soul -
still, my mind yearns to be the last loose knit barb
of the beautiful peacock feather that adorns your crown. 
In my dream, as I breathe in the pulsating air of a gently wafting flute tune, 
I hear You, my Lord, and yearn to treasure Your tune in the vibrance of my breath.. 

Kindly accept my offerings my Lord: these simple, naive words of prayer
although they are in fragments, like the playful scribbles of a child on a wall...

Note:
1) Peacock feather: Here, it signifies the peacock feather that always adorns Lord Krishna's crown. 
2) Flute Tune: In Hindu mythology, Lord Krishna is always pictured as a cowherd boy with a crown of peacock's feather and as playing His divine flute. 

Date: 12/07/2021
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Callus Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Your offering of love and faith will not fall on deaf ears, Anitha. Your words are vibrant and uplifting. ~ Regards // paul
Proxenos Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 8:38 PM
Best wishes my friend for the contest and may the year 2022 be one of great joy and achievements, and above all love for one another in your family. an awesome write of great faith. Love and hugs, Jennifer.
Jangid Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Two gems love and peace dwell in my heart and mind, amazing??
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 12:51 PM
Just coming to this beautiful write of yours to wish you again a very happy new year, dear friend.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 3:40 PM
Revisiting to congratulate you again. Sending this to my faves. My favourite theme. Love and hugs ~ Mala
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 6:43 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story. Blessings ~ Debra
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 3:56 PM
Anitha, this is really high quality writing, and I can really sense your amazing faith in your beliefs. I see this is from several days ago. Can't believe I missed it. You so deserved to be on this winner list. Congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Though we differ in our beliefs, you have written a lovely poem!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. You created an enchanting spiritual, devotional poem inspired by verses from Geetanjali! This is the book I always carry with me. Thank you for participating. Love ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 9:57 PM
Inspired by 'Gitanjali' , your work is really beautiful. Real depth is explicitly brought out. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write. Have a blessed day writing away....................
George Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 12:14 AM
Beautiful poetry reminding me of Tagore's hymns of devotion in Gitanjali. You have done full justice to the translation. Like the image- of a 'playful child scribbling on the wall'.... Best of Luck in the contest Ani
Brown Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Lovely, Beautifuly written. gGood Luck inthe contest. Blessings ~ Debra
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 5:34 AM
- Beautiful written, dear Ani :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 12:03 PM
A verse of devotion and praise, well composed Ani and best of luck in the contest, I hope you are keeping well. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 8:56 AM
Great inspirational poem full of devotion and piety. May the Lord be blessed. Victor
Pandit Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Words of longing radiate love and peace in this solemn poem, Ani. Your prayer of devotion resonates in your brilliant words. Expertly executed, as always.
Mcintosh Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 6:37 AM
Enchanting words... although I will always only pray to or worship my Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ... this is beautifully done. God bless you sweet lady, Love, Gina
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