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My October

Imagine the soft strings of a guitar simply weep Her heart weighs with sorrow and regret A melody soft and sad, where dreams cry to be reviewed Even the hardest hearts melt at her tune As the days grow old fast, the leaves turn brown and orange October signals the coming end and restart of life Still I yearn for days past, where my smile wasn't bogus When my heart was not as heavy as this guitars I stare out the window, and nature breathes a frigid breath Her tiredness is shown as the climate changes off and on Yet men thrive to tare her down to build and lust to vanity I crave the aroma of freshly brewed coffee, pausing to realize I used to worry about simple cartoons when I was a kid Now it's life and battle after battle with many struggles I find comfort in my sleep, where I can't feel I write to please my soul, perhaps you feel like I do I don't want to die, God created my mind and set it up for eternity My memory fades but never leaves His love empowers my confidence to succeed Slowly death crawls towards each of us A battle that we all lose, yet in the end will we find peace? Glimpse of Halloween death arrives and so does hope for tomorrow life is anew with each day given Where are you my love, where did you go I look and and can't find you Perhaps life will never be fair nor joyous for my heart Still I weep in hopes I too fade into this glimpse of October

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Date: 9/14/2014 7:25:00 AM
What a beautiful poem Edward; First of all I love October poems, second I love guitar music and third, I loved your poem. Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day... Lucilla
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Date: 9/3/2014 9:05:00 AM
I read it and see myself in some of those verses Edward. People who are more sensitive than others will definitely share your view as I did. Have a ncie day ;)
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Date: 12/16/2013 11:15:00 AM
- Edward, a pleasure to be the first that comments this beautiful poem October m / Halloween. - A very well written poem. - I would also wish you and everyone you love a enjoyable Christmas! - All the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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