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Abundant rains pelt on the window's foggy glass with a rhythm too sad; mist, raindrops and dreariness deepen my nostalgic mood: when sunshine was felt at noon.... The orchard's petals adorn the small cupid's head over the fountain: an oasis for robins; today, they don't warble, but sip water from their well... From this window-sill, daisies, dangling from their vase, struggle on their stems only to commiserate, with their sympathetic glance, my nostalgic mood of brighter days... Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 5/7/2009 7:04:00 PM
Oh, Andrew, you capture the sadness I associate with rainy days so well! Psychologist say dreary days can truly cause feelings of depression. But the sun always returns, so we hang in there awaiting the joy its light brings. Lovely poem!
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