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My Nostalgia

MY NOSTALGIA water sport's bath tub under sunny winter's soft loud cry at that time she tried to put me I lifted legs forcefully filled with tearing eyes after few seconds as soon as she put me in felt comfortable me started laughing clapping applauding gone on she took me out then

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/31/2014 11:01:00 AM

beautiful slice of infant life delighting my senses... thanks too,bl, for reading me.. huggs

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/31/2014 11:04:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely comment my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Fabiyas M V

Date: 8/31/2014 2:38:00 AM

Mother, babe and bathing nicely presented. Well done,Bl Devnath. Thank you for your comments on my poem.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/31/2014 8:02:00 AM

Thanks my friend for stopping by on my poem with nice comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2014 5:13:00 PM

oh my . No sooner did the kid get used to the bath, and he was being taken out!!! Sweet set.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/30/2014 5:25:00 PM

When the baby was clapping and applauding in the water of the tub, mother already did that, my lovely friend. Something to be assumed. Thanks for your comment. Loved always,bl