My Nights Is Getting Colder

I feel like my nights is getting colder...
There's a lot of weight on my shoulders....
So much pain that I can't take....
So many smiles that I try to fake...
Living in a world with black walls....
Walk a little then fall in deep holes....
Try to reach high to see the light...
But there's no strength left to fight...
Use a pray for one rain drop....
Wishing to go back in time or make it stop....
Drowning pictures with my salty tears....
Starting a new life and throwing all of my life years....
All what I do is fantasize....
So I can believe that I'm a live....
I feel problems cutting my throat...
And darkness is getting over my thoughts...
I'm paralyzed and I can't make a sound....
I'm in a place that no one can find....
So I go back to god and pray....
Cause he knows what's inside with no words to say...
Maybe god will wash my sins....
And maybe my  tragedy  soon will ends....

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Date: 1/26/2016 10:22:00 PM
"I'm in a place that no one can find..." when lost, we must search, when discovered, we must trust, when loved, we must love...let your your love be found, as I have with the woman I love, and you will know God's blessing my Violet Poetess...J.A.B
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/27/2016 1:30:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear for ur sweet sweet comment, I'm speechless really after these beautiful deep words , much appreciated, hugs / / :)
Date: 1/17/2016 10:23:00 AM
I hope the nights aren't cold anymore, this is an heartfelt write Dalia...
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 11:27:00 AM
It's getting warmer and warmer every day , thanks for the lovely visit, hugs / / :)
Date: 1/6/2016 12:19:00 PM
I am sorry Dalia, forgot to leave a rating. A definite seven and a fave. Sorry about that, so forgetful today.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/6/2016 1:51:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it and many thanks , big hug // :)
Date: 1/6/2016 12:18:00 PM
Hi Dalia, another write that touches buttons deep inside the reader. Your words make people feel, bring out emotions deep inside the reader. As i always say Dalia, one can always find little lost gems of poetry. This is one such gem my friend. You can sometimes take us through the gamut of emotions. Let your heart ever sing in your words Dalia. May your pen ever run gold....Vladislav.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/6/2016 1:50:00 PM
No my dear don't worry I'm pleased by ur sweet and delightful words , as much as I'm mesmerized by this lovely and beautiful comment , much appreciated and hugs / / :)
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