My Niece and Nephews' Childhood's Laughing Sound

my niece and nephews’ childhood's laughing sound 
                            in quite loneliness I feel and in dream I found 
                           when I see many other children on play ground 
                             after one another they dash and run around 
                          i feel my niece and nephews are in my compound 
                       with a ball all they are busy to throw and catch around 
                             in fun their sweating bodies wet in to browned 
                            when trick is done by any one other gets wound 
                          at that time to that spot they quickly come around
                          naughty one with smiling cheeks tries all to astound
                        seeing their lovely game my past memory does resound 
          their glistened eyes memorizes me my niece and nephews' childhood surround  


                            Written on: 1st June 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/18/2016 12:20:00 PM
B.L., wonderful write congratulations on your win! Hugs eve
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Date: 6/18/2016 12:22:00 PM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes with appreciation. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/16/2016 4:30:00 PM
Nicely done! Congratulations!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/17/2016 12:02:00 PM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/16/2016 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations....a loely composition.
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Date: 6/16/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thanks my lovely sweet friend for wishing me congratulation with appreciation. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/16/2016 8:01:00 AM
BL, Congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 6/16/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for giving placement in your contest. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/16/2016 7:55:00 AM
BL, I am back to congratulate you on your fine win in Laura's contest! Well done! Sandra
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Date: 6/16/2016 9:59:00 AM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for wishing me congratulation with appreciation. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/13/2016 12:22:00 PM
Very nice, BL! The sweet sound of family!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/13/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/3/2016 11:15:00 AM
This rhymes off the tongue, BL. Let the children play and enjoy themselves while they can! ~ paul
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Date: 6/3/2016 12:46:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Your inspiration helps me to go ahead with poems my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/1/2016 6:20:00 PM
that is a really good example of monorhyming, my friend. Well done.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/2/2016 9:54:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/1/2016 4:32:00 PM
A sweet monorhyme, BL. Laura will love it! Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Date: 6/1/2016 4:36:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful wishes with beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/1/2016 11:40:00 AM
a charming monorhyme BL:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/1/2016 11:55:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
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