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My New Truck

My New Truck
6/30/13

Finally got a brand new truck.
How did I have such awesome luck?
I wish it would run,
I’d have much fun,
It’s sadly, in the driveway, stuck.

Copyright © Drjim Martin | Year Posted 2013

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July 22, 2013 at 6:17 AM

Congratulations on your win! Cheers, Roy

July 21, 2013 at 4:28 PM

Congrats on your fine winning entry

July 22, 2013 at 5:05 AM

Thanks Russell!!

Barbara Gorelick

July 21, 2013 at 4:01 PM

Hope you've got it running by now..this is great! congrats. BG

July 22, 2013 at 5:05 AM

Thanks Barbara!! Glad you liked it...Jim

Shadow Hamilton

July 21, 2013 at 2:54 AM

Hi Dr Jim congrats on win Shadow x smiles

July 21, 2013 at 12:38 PM

Thanks Shadow!! Appreciate your response...Jim

Andrea Dietrich

July 21, 2013 at 1:25 AM

this is a really cute one. Congrats on your win.

July 21, 2013 at 12:39 PM

Thanks Andrea! Glad you liked it...Jim

July 20, 2013 at 9:16 PM

Looks like you ran out of the awesome luck...funny :) Congratulations on your win :)

July 21, 2013 at 12:40 PM

Thanks Karen!! Luck lasts for such a short time LOL...Jim

July 20, 2013 at 8:19 PM

Dr Jim, A good winning poem. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~

July 21, 2013 at 12:41 PM

Thx Skat!! Glad you liked it....Jim

July 20, 2013 at 8:12 PM

I'm really 'stuck' on this hilarious limerick Dr. Jim!...Congratulations on a well deserved win sir - Tim

July 21, 2013 at 12:43 PM

Thanks Tim!! Yep, stuck again!!! Glad you liked it...Jim

July 20, 2013 at 7:14 PM

Loved this one :) Good, clean humour! Congrats on your win in my contest!

July 20, 2013 at 7:19 PM

Thanks Heather!! Glad you liked it...Jim

June 30, 2013 at 7:07 PM

I like the limerick Jim, hope you get the truck working. i have a car, stuck and in the way. Thank you for sharing <3 ~SKAT~ <3

July 1, 2013 at 5:25 AM

Thank you Skat!! Glad you liked it...Jim

April Gabriella

June 30, 2013 at 5:21 PM

I love this! The exact thing happened with me and my car. We'd have such fun if it wasn't broken in the driveway. UGH.

July 1, 2013 at 5:26 AM

Thanks April. Glad you liked it....Jim

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