Yvette Dignos Poet Free verse

My New Loo Perspective

The release, our body’s mystical excretion
The seat you perch for success or redemption
A subconscious practice we fulfill everyday
But not a favorable topic to vulgarly say

With or without candles we make it plunge
The emptiness is fulfilling, shall we once again munch?
Once is enough, thrice means dehydration
Discomfort is the name for what relates to constipation

The loo keeps more than a confession
It has immeasurable perseverance from odor sedation
So sit with a new perspective
Everybody poops, therefore honor its objective!

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Skat A September 24, 2015 at 11:53 AM Yvette, Congrats on your win. Another interesting contest. LOVE SKAT

Viv Wigley September 22, 2015 at 7:45 AM I see no problem with poetry as a hobby, in writing about the antics of a jobby. Well done, Yvette. Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 22, 2015 at 12:37 AM Congrats on ur excellent winning write Yvette! well if seen with this perspective!

Jan Allison August 15, 2015 at 7:15 AM Made me giggle Yvette - I was blocked for writing a poem about a floating pooh - not a topic for poets to write about - what a load of poop lol it actually made my works even more popular as a result - there are some topics I won't write about but there is nothing wrong with a bit of toilet humour to make people smile lol:-) xx Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Yvette Dignos August 15, 2015 at 7:57 PM Haha. That's awesome! :) thank you jan! I really enjoyed making this poem. The challenge is really fun! :)