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My New Loo Perspective

The release, our body’s mystical excretion The seat you perch for success or redemption A subconscious practice we fulfill everyday But not a favorable topic to vulgarly say With or without candles we make it plunge The emptiness is fulfilling, shall we once again munch? Once is enough, thrice means dehydration Discomfort is the name for what relates to constipation The loo keeps more than a confession It has immeasurable perseverance from odor sedation So sit with a new perspective Everybody poops, therefore honor its objective!

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Date: 9/24/2015 11:53:00 AM
Yvette, Congrats on your win. Another interesting contest. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2015 7:45:00 AM
I see no problem with poetry as a hobby, in writing about the antics of a jobby. Well done, Yvette. Viv x
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Date: 9/22/2015 12:37:00 AM
Congrats on ur excellent winning write Yvette! well if seen with this perspective!
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Date: 8/15/2015 7:15:00 AM
Made me giggle Yvette - I was blocked for writing a poem about a floating pooh - not a topic for poets to write about - what a load of poop lol it actually made my works even more popular as a result - there are some topics I won't write about but there is nothing wrong with a bit of toilet humour to make people smile lol:-) xx Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Yvette Dignos
Date: 8/15/2015 7:57:00 PM
Haha. That's awesome! :) thank you jan! I really enjoyed making this poem. The challenge is really fun! :)

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