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My New Adieu

How I met my girlfriend- Suzie Q 
We met each other on fifth avenue 
When I first saw her, softly, I said- "Whew! 
I am blessed; it was she I bumped into 
She told me that she once lived in Peru 
Smiling, I told her that I once lived there too! 
She told me that she works by the bayou, 
bartending at the pub "The Rendezvous" 
I told her- "Great" ...I will be there at two!
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Kingston Avatar
March 14, 2026 at 5:10 PM
How darling, your poem paints such a lovely picture Charles. I loved your last three lines so much. Je parle francais. What a sweet couple you will make. Tres bien et bonne nuit. I smell romance in the air.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 5:13 PM
awww, just clever as can be.
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 9:44 AM
Cute cute cute!
Anaya Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 12:06 PM
Ah, good for you too! Fun monorhymes. Have a nice weekend! xXHugs
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