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Wrote on Father's Day, 2011.

My Name

She smiles and my name is said with such unbound glee. 
Though not the one I was born with, this one that holds more meaning.

Alike her brother too will call it though in harmonized repeat like waves in slow repetition. As his bare feet slap surface and he approaches.

The understanding of it's meaning escapes me for the moment, though my heart knows it's significants, my mind can't wrap around it.

They hold the key to my day and in their actions can build me up or break me. But when happy I too am happy, the world's a warmer place.

In thought alone, I then reflect on my comings and my goings. My name is mentioned in parting sorrow and in joyful arrival.

My name eluded then, bright illuminated now. I know my greater purpose. To teach them of moral and respect, to teach of right and wrong.

My goal is to teach them to love, as another FATHER shows me. Though I may often falter, I am my children's "Daddy" as they so heartwarmingly remind me.
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Acrich Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 9:57 AM
(: I won't say too much, I don't want to BS you, rich vocabulary
Zerlaut Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 9:59 AM
thank you for the read. :)
Buck Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Jesse: One day these little ones will read this and weep. Somethings we don't understand as kids. The understanding often doesn't come until years later. Thank you for sharing another great write with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
Zerlaut Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 1:00 AM
Forgive me for the delay in response, Oldbuck. I'm glad it spoke to you. My kids are my world. I love being their dad.
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 8:17 PM
this is so heartwarming. What a GREAT take on one's "name"!!!
Zerlaut Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 1:59 AM
thank you dear, it's the greatest thing I've ever been called.
Maverick Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 3:19 PM
Enjoyed the rich content and deep contented feel you show us here Jesse, enjoyed the read.'
Zerlaut Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 9:32 AM
thank you, Joe. My kids are my world.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 12:41 PM
A lovely sentimental poem , fatherly and heartwarming. Great freeverse style form. Thumbs up. Soo nice to read from your pen again. Hoping u will too u will too my latest.
Zerlaut Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Thank you for the words. I'll be sure to visit your ink as well. :)
Duffield Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 8:46 AM
A perceptive reflection...handled well
Zerlaut Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Thank you, Brian
Anish Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 11:17 AM
The last line is kind of sweet. Thanks for dropping by. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Zerlaut Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Thank you, Matthew.
Deo Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 6:07 PM
loved it; glad u are dedicated to teaching the next generation ALL facets of successful family and community life. Anil Deo (i had to come back; i was kicked off before my comments posted, LOL)
Zerlaut Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 10:45 PM
It's hard for me to imagine what a man feels inside who doesn't want to be their to raise their kids. They are just far to treasurable to not be around.
Sergi Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Hi Jesse: A beautiful poetic approach to the name Daddy or Father. My compliments!
Zerlaut Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 10:44 PM
Thank you Ralph, I'm glad you appreciate it.
Kendrick Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Ahh!! How wonderful a work about the role of being a father which is a very wonderful position to have in life..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by my work..I know that winters must be very hard on the people up north..I don't think that my body could handle that kind of weather..I would have to get equipped to stay inside during the worst part of it..Sara
Zerlaut Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 10:43 PM
it's good weather for warm blankets, cuddling and fireplaces. Hot chocolate/coffee.. books and conversations. My favorite weather.. the colder the better.
Bertin Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 11:52 AM
I miss my Dad. A very touching poem. Thanks for your comments on my stuff
Zerlaut Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 10:42 PM
John I'd love to see more of your poems. I'll be watching for more. :)
Wanter Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 11:18 AM
How did I miss this. My "father" was and is, though gone to God, my "Daddy."
Zerlaut Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 10:41 PM
Thank you, Sunlite. I love hearing them call my name... especially on harder days.
Wanter Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 11:21 AM
P.S. God is of course Father to us. 7 and fav.
Melugin Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 10:41 AM
Jesse, That other FATHER'S direction will be the guiding light for you and yours, forever! Your poetic personality has a new friend! 7 My best to you, chuck
Zerlaut Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 10:24 AM
thank you for taking the time to read it, Chuck. Glad you liked it.
Abdi Langaan  Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 6:03 AM
You are a great kind of experienced father , and words definitely showed that.
Zerlaut Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 10:23 AM
I think fathering is a learned experience. We learn from the mistakes our parents make and find profound reason to repeat their successes.
Campbell Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Jesse, this is beautifully expressed!
Zerlaut Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 10:22 AM
glad you like it Kerinth
White Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 12:59 PM
I love this. I live with my sister, her husband and their two little ones (4 and 2), and I adore them. And they me. They are so happy to see me and they bring me such joy. This is written with so much tenderness.
Zerlaut Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 11:12 PM
My kids are quite a bit older now... but the way kids are so affectionate, they overlook our faults and we can do no wrong in their eyes. It's a beautiful gift
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 5:08 PM
oh so so touching Jesse and I am sure you are a wonderful role model to your children:-) hugs Jan xx
Zerlaut Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 3:56 AM
thank you Jan, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Teagan Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 7:59 AM
Jesse, this is so touching... there is nothing more important than being mommy or daddy, loving and teaching our children. Very very well done, my friend.
Zerlaut Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 3:55 AM
Thank you, Becca. I'm not always the best dad, but I want to be, that's always at the back of my mind that I want to be the best I can for them.
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