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My Muse Once Sleeping Is Awake

The blackened veins of parlor’s scent. The roses blue and weeping spent. The dismal pen — a slogging snake. My Muse Once Sleeping Is Awake. A harbinger hung on the door — This shrouded wreath — a heartless core. The piercing words, a pounding stake. My Muse Once Sleeping Is Awake. For if I’d only been dreaming . . . Then why my lips senseless screaming? The serpent raps, I feel its shake — My Muse Once Sleeping Is Awake. The faint of dread, when quill was dry, I wondered if it’s breath would sigh. No nightmares please! It’s my mistake! My Muse Once Sleeping Is Awake. 7/10/2019 Writing Challenge 1, July 2019 - Repeating Refrain Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart Title and refrain provided by sponsor Checked by howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 7/19/2019 9:02:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge with this amazing write, I loved everything about it !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2019 9:20:00 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs...Kim
Date: 7/17/2019 6:11:00 PM
A wonderful view of the muse. Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2019 6:19:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanne!
Date: 7/17/2019 5:20:00 PM
I love your unique take on the theme Kim, the imagery is awesome I especially love 'the dismal pen a slogging snake!'Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2019 6:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! xx
Date: 7/16/2019 9:27:00 PM
I knew this would take first place...Congrats on your win..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2019 10:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph! <3 Kim
Date: 7/16/2019 8:21:00 PM
Kim congrats on your win!;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2019 8:25:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda!
Date: 7/14/2019 5:51:00 PM
I'm with Panagiota. This is positively Shakespearean in its flow and impact. Very, very nicely done! G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2019 8:28:00 PM
Thanks so much! Sonnets are not easy writes but they can be fun!
Date: 7/13/2019 1:26:00 PM
Hi Kim, You have written a good piece the contest theme. I found this to be clever and so poetic. The rhymes you used worked well also. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2019 7:34:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis! Hugs...Kim
Date: 7/12/2019 1:46:00 PM
Hi Kim, A clever write with a clever twist and a clever poetess who brought it all together for Dear Heart's contest - very different, good luck in the contest. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2019 5:10:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 7/11/2019 2:04:00 PM
Sounds almost Shakesperian. My wishes for a win. So well deserved. Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2019 5:44:00 PM
That’s what I was going for! Thanks!
Date: 7/10/2019 8:15:00 PM
Kim, your words of choice fit together in a stunning write. Well done! Anything with a refrain scares me to death; you have a mastery of this for sure!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2019 10:32:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! Keep trying!
Date: 7/10/2019 6:39:00 PM
Very creative Kim, Great write..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2019 10:32:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 7/10/2019 4:58:00 PM
"The dismal pen a slogging snake", "The serpent raps I feel its shake", AMAZING! Very well done. A sure winner and a FAV for me!.....80)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2019 5:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Pat!
Date: 7/10/2019 2:23:00 PM
now...that reads with one fascinating little twist...good one
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2019 2:35:00 PM
Thank you, dear Sand!

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