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My Muse of Poetry

Not all the worlds belong to me Not all the words set me free What the heart loves is of will I just free some words to confine its spill. **** A time, my words on my papers sashaying the shape to me alluring the tone of their steps I hear as they are dancing the music they are following the soul, in a trance, just listens without interfering. **** A time, along with my Muse we keep to each other our hearts baring secrets sharing silently, knowingly connecting.. When it comes to share our worlds in words that’s the difficulty! “That’s to be spelled” “No! It can’t be!” “That belongs to my world of poetry!” “No! that’s a huge part of me! no words allowed to touch its beauty!” **** How dare you invoke me then deny my poetry!? How dare you be wedded to me and deprive your soul of my verse and divinity!? **** In my womb you shape a life.. a reality a present.. a past memory.. and what is to be.. And you still think you spill your words out of will! **** I inspire.. I own the fire.. I pave paths, not all able to bear the burn But those blessed with divine grace the power to mystery embrace The ones who, a feeble voice render a sublime poetry! **** “All my words can set you free just follow me!” I have my say With my best wishes Your Muse of poetry.. Silent One contest October 5th, 2020

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 12/17/2020 10:11:00 AM

Sister! Sister! I have deeply considered the realm and address of Poetry, capital P. And I write about poetics,too. Here, there is NO doubt to me that you received and wrote a true inspiration...that which seems to write itself. I am so glad my morning here led to you. I will be a follower. Happy to meet you!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/1/2021 4:09:00 AM

The honour and pleasure are mine dear poetess, Sally.. so beautiful is your presence! So wonderful are your words! Thank you so much for your uplifting feedback! My warmest wishes. Deepest regards and blessings.

Silent One

Date: 11/3/2020 9:11:00 AM

Besma, has your muse fallen asleep or are you too busy for your muse?

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/5/2020 12:32:00 AM

The Muse of poetry is always prevailing in the vastest of imaginations.. in the deepest of souls.. inspiring the hearts and the minds that are ever awake keeping her company and ready to ink the entrancing charm.. Thank you so much, Silent One for being here with your genuine care and interest in the beauty of poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Tamanna Ferdous

Date: 11/2/2020 5:42:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/5/2020 12:24:00 AM

So much a delight to see you here dear Tamanna.. thank you so much for your beautiful response! My warmest wishes. Best regards and blessings

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/18/2020 3:30:00 AM

Truly a wonderful and most inspiring poem my friend. A great pleasure to have read and enjoyed this fine morn. "Sublime poetry" indeed. Such as comes from pure and deep poetic heart! Yes, your gifting is a treasure to we that are so benefited and cheered by its offerings. A fav, a gem...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/5/2020 12:22:00 AM

Honoured and elated by your presence and great words of support, Robert.. thank you so much for the uplifting feedback and generous compliment.. May God bless you. My warmest wishes. Best regards.

Jcb Brul

Date: 10/15/2020 10:46:00 PM

Heart-warming piece dear Besma. Very expressive! Congratulations on you tOP WIN..A fave for me..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/5/2020 12:16:00 AM

My honour and pleasure, dear JCB! Your graceful presence is highly warming and appreciated.. thank you so much for your wonderful feedback and praise.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/15/2020 2:33:00 AM

Beautifully composed Besma and I see congratulations are in order. Hope you're well. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/5/2020 12:18:00 AM

Your generosity.. your support.. your wonderful and encouraging words are of great help and significance, Tom.. thank you so much for being here and sharing the beauty of your soul.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Robertina B.

Date: 10/12/2020 5:54:00 PM

Your magnificent write had me in a trance, dear Besma.. Congratulations on your first place win! Such a masterpiece, my friend.. An inspirational and moving write! It certainly touched my heart and soul.. This is going right into my favs dear Poetess! Many blessing to you..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/13/2020 11:40:00 AM

I'm honoured and so much pleased my humble work could find its way to beautiful hearts and minds! Deeply humbled and grateful for such a rewarding compliment, dear Robertina! Thank you so much for your highly valued presence! Best regards and blessings.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2020 3:45:00 PM

Such depth in this write Besma. Incredibly moving. Congratulations! Linda

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/13/2020 11:33:00 AM

An immense pleasure to read such a wonderful appreciation! Thank you so much, Linda for your great support and congratulations! Best regards and blessings.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/8/2020 5:31:00 PM

It fills my heart with joy to return and offer you, my sweet sister, my heartfelt congratulations for your excellent win. Magnificence cannot be ignored, dearest Besma, in both your sublime poetry and your glorious spirit. Enjoy the fruits of your pen, your intellect and artistry and congratulations once again! Warmest wishes, love and hugs to you always.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/9/2020 3:27:00 PM

Dear soul sister Susan, I'm truly in awe of your poetic and genuine words! You are of kindness and grace to bestow upon my humble soul and poetry such elevating and heart warming compliments! Thank you so much for the honour of your presence to congratulate and share my bliss.. My warmest wishes. Best regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/8/2020 10:28:00 AM

- What a wonderful poem, Besma :) - Congratulations on your top first place in the contest ... I love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/9/2020 3:08:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, I am deeply humbled and honoured by your praise and appreciation! Thank you so much! Warmest wishes. Love and hugs.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/8/2020 9:58:00 AM

Delighted to see this poem at the TOP of #1. BIG congrats Besma on this superb win.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/9/2020 3:07:00 PM

And I am so delighted to have you here on my page with your so warm and sincere congrats.. thank you so much, dear Vijay! Best regards and blessings

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/8/2020 9:31:00 AM

Besma, so many outstanding, creative and unique poetic phrases and images. You and your muse did well! Congratulations on your first place win!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/9/2020 2:54:00 PM

Of great humility and generosity to grant me so honouring a visit and so wonderful and rewarding a feedback! Thank you so much, Sam for your sincere congratulations! So much humbled.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/8/2020 8:52:00 AM

Besma , a gem - congratulations on your top win my dear friend. Enjoy the honor and as I always say, your talent is terrific - dear poetess, I'm humbled to know you as a friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/9/2020 2:50:00 PM

My sweet soul sister, how kind of you to honour me with your visit to congratulate me! So much obliged to you for your beauty! Thank you so much. Love and hugs dear Jenny.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 10/8/2020 8:31:00 AM

Brilliance in simple language, a gift! very well done and congrats on your top win!!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/9/2020 2:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for such great words and congratulations! Deeply humbled! So honored and pleased by your visit. My deepest regards and blessings.

Silent One

Date: 10/8/2020 7:19:00 AM

To relay your emotion here to what makes you want to free your words, You take the reader on a poetical journey here... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/8/2020 8:05:00 AM

What a great pleasure and honour you brought to me, Silent One! So much humbled by your wonderful impressions on my work! I'm so happy you liked it and find it worthy of appreciation! Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.

Maria Williams

Date: 10/7/2020 3:33:00 AM

Every time we praise something, every time we appreciate something, every time we acknowledge something, every time we feel good about something we are telling the Universe'More of this please'. You inspire and light the fire my dearest friend for many who will follow in your footsteps. A wonderful woman,mother , teacher and a wonderful Poetess. Bravo, this poem looks like a WINNER to me, however good luck. You set the bar high....Maria Hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/8/2020 7:59:00 AM

Dearest friend Maria, I highly value and cherish your beautiful and insightful response! I run out of words that could render my great delight and gratitude for such sincere sentiments and great support! You have never ceased to give me a generous poetic hand! You are of great beauty and inspiration sweet friend and poetess! A great lady I always look up to.. thank you so much for the happiness and love you are spreading.. my warmest wishes and deepest regards.. God bless you. Love and hugs.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/5/2020 11:56:00 AM

Such profound poetry spills from a golden heart alive with introspection and a shining pen vibrant with vivid talent to express such an amazing musing. Your glorious poem, dear Besma, illustrates the spiritual, intellectual, physical, artistic, commanding, demanding, beautiful, elusive sharing nature of the connection of a muse to the poetess and her precious pen. An inspired work of art in tribute to inspiration. From a passionate womb passionate poetry is born to this avid reader‘s wonderment and appreciation. A masterwork and a fav, my sweet soul sister. Best wishes for the contest. Warmest wishes, love and hugs to you always.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/5/2020 1:36:00 PM

What a sweet feeling! A mixture of satisfaction, contentment and gratitude.. Words unlike other words! Dear soul sister Susan, veneration, beauty, love, grace, kindness, insight, elegance.. and more.. are dripping from your words! I read your so beautiful and elevating response so many a time.. and I am more and more filled with gratefulness to you for such a reward! Such an honour! You are of great beauty and humility to genuinely and generously offer me the purest scent of your poetic nature! A soul sister, an avid reader, a great poetess, an Artist, what a blessing from God to walk along with you a wondrous path paved by the Muse of poetry! Forgive my words if they failed to display what I feel about you.. thank you so much! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/5/2020 7:09:00 AM

Superlative imagination rendered on paper to produce an ode to the elusive muse. You are sure to out do us all. Admiration all round. ~~

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/5/2020 1:11:00 PM

Deeply humbled, Victor, by your kindness and compliment.. such sincere and generous words uplift my soul and boost my humble poetry.. thank you so much for your honouring presence and great support.. My best regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/5/2020 5:32:00 AM

This is a stunning ode to inspiration, Besma. I enjoyed the force of your speech--I inspire..I own the fire.. And who doesn't recognize this feeling: ..A time, my words on my papers sashaying the shape to me alluring.... Your opening stanza is amazing. A definite FAVE for me.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/5/2020 1:01:00 PM

I owe a deep gratitude to my Muse of poetry for granting an inspiration and igniting my pen.. so much a pleasure receiving your wonderful and encouraging feedback.. thank you so much dear Vijay for your continuous and great support.. so much obliged to you for the fave! My warmest wishes. Best regards and blessings.