My Mommy Took Him, Nursery Rhyme

I want to tell you a story,
About a little boy,
Who went up to his bedroom
To get his favourite toy.
But when he opened his bedroom door
And popped inside his head,
He couldn't see him anywhere
And he had left him on his bed.
So he looked inside the wardrobe,
And he looked behind the chair,
He looked on the window sill
But still he wasn't there.
So he started emptying boxes
And pulling out the drawers,
He didn't know what was happening
He had never been gone before.
His mother heard the banging
And all the crashing about.
So she went upstairs to investigate
What the noise is all about.
When she saw him sat there
He had tears in his eye,
She had never seen him so upset
She nearly started to cry.
Between the sobs he told her
That he couldn't find his ted.
That he had come upstairs to get him
So he could go to bed.
She told him it was to early,
That they hadn't had their tea.
Then we can snuggle on the sofa
And watch a little TV.
Then we can go and get your ted,
So you don't have to cry.
You can put him back on your bed,
He will be nice and clean and dry.

Wanted to make this into a picture
Nursery rhyme book.
Edited on 20/4/2021.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/10/2023 2:51:00 AM
Hi Simon, this is all very new to me, I really like the style of your work, I also have a poem that I have yet to post which I would really see it as a picture nursery rhyme. Thank you anyway, Mark
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Date: 7/7/2023 7:48:00 PM
Sweet poem! It reminds me of my son! Lovely!
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Simon Hamill
Date: 7/9/2023 4:01:00 AM
hi Diane, glad you liked it, I wrote it for grandchildren, thought it would make a nice nursery short story book, take care. :-)
Date: 4/24/2021 8:18:00 AM
Poor little guy! A sweet story, Simon! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Simon Hamill
Date: 4/24/2021 9:42:00 AM
Thank you kim.i wrote it for my grandchildren.take care,simon
Date: 4/23/2021 8:28:00 PM
Simon, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/24/2021 7:57:00 PM
It will make a wonderful children's book.
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Simon Hamill
Date: 4/24/2021 9:47:00 AM
Hi eve.thank you for my placement. I wrote it for my grandchildren.thought it would make a nice picture story..thanks again,take care.simon
Date: 11/23/2020 9:38:00 AM
Simon, congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest with this wonderful write, it is delightful _Constance
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Simon Hamill
Date: 11/23/2020 1:03:00 PM
Thank you constance,it's nice when you get a placement or win.but I do it because I enjoy it, and the people on here have all been so nice.take care.simon.:)
Date: 10/27/2020 8:14:00 AM
awww bless, too young to understand that ted needs a bath too. Can truly relate to your poem, nicely written Simon, Emilia : ) and welcome to the Soup
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Simon Hamill
Date: 10/27/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thanks.and it's good to be here.its nice doing something I like with people who understand.simon
Date: 10/27/2020 6:50:00 AM
Nice rhyme
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Simon Hamill
Date: 10/27/2020 8:04:00 AM
Thank you.i wrote it for grandkids.cheers.simon
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