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My Moment of Truth

Today I awoke to my moment of truth, I'm no longer as young as I was in my youth, And perceived, later on, to my further dismay, I'm not even as young as I was yesterday. Oh, how and why was my youth so misspent, And how can I find when and whither it went? Was it hung in a closet, or tossed in a drawer, Is Peter Pan really gone, boon companion no more? As I woke up this morning, he was with me, I swear. When I looked in the glass, though, a stranger was there. Oh, I'll ransack each closet, every cupboard, and drawer, But I fear I'll not find that sweet boy anywhere. Now a new thought emerges, one not nearly so bleak: I'm not yet as old as I will be next week. So, Peter, adieu, sayonara, and ciao, Please keep my youth with you, I'm too old for it now. Oh, dear, golden boy, oh, bright symbol of youth, We cannot remain young, that's the bittersweet truth. Yet silver-fringed laughter hide-and-seeks in the hall, And I smile for my youth hasn't vanished at all. My mem'ries are young, I invoke them at will, Like the spirit of Pan that remains with me still.

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Date: 8/16/2022 9:26:00 AM
WOW!!! What a fun rhyme/write. I will Not grow up. I think Peter is my brother. It runs in the family, young forever. Hahahaha. Have a fun/great/blessed day.....................
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 8/16/2022 10:18:00 AM
Paula, thank you. I'm not sure I even know what the term "growing up" means. Young forever, indeed...or at least for as long as we choose to be.
Date: 7/30/2022 7:15:00 PM
Hi Jim Slaughter, I love Peter Pan, saw the play with Kathy Rigby, magnificent! I enjoyed your poem ~Anaya
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 7/31/2022 10:54:00 AM
Anaya, thank you. Yes, I saw the TV version of that production.
Date: 7/30/2022 5:36:00 PM
Awesome piece of poetry Jim. It reminds me of one of Mark Twain's famous quips: “Age is an issue of the mind over matter. If you don’t mind, it doesn’t matter.” Thanks for sharing and stopping by my place earlier. Write on...Terry
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 7/31/2022 10:53:00 AM
Thanks, T. Mark Twain is my all-time favorite author.
Date: 7/29/2022 1:13:00 PM
Jim - your rhyming is spot on, as is the message of this wonderful poem. I very much enjoyed it, especially the upbeat ending…
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 7/29/2022 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene. I think I decided long ago that since I couldn't do anything about getting older, at least I didn't have to let it get me down. And my interest in writing has helped a lot with that.
Date: 7/29/2022 11:37:00 AM
This is awesome....or as we way in Boston WICKED PISSA!!!! Had me chuckling the whole way through with the great flow and rhymes...MAGNIFICENT!!! straight ahead, first star on the right.
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 7/29/2022 11:45:00 AM
John, thank you. Peter Pan never was my alter ego, but once, during my acting days, I did appear in a stage production of "Peter Pan"...didn't play Peter, but I was an excellent Smee, if I say so myself...and I do.

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