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My Mistake

I took a walk on a road less travelled And all around me there were weeds And brambles. The trees were bare Of leaves and stood like frozen marble I took a walk on a road less travelled And I became confused, and lost My way. I met people I didn’t like and felt terribly abused. I took a walk on a road less travelled And that was a mistake. I thought I could change my life, but that was not To be. now I’m looking for a paved road And I really do need some help.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/6/2018 7:21:00 PM
I hope things are looking up for you soon Carlos!!! I guess the road less travelled is not always the best choice! ~Judy
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Date: 1/7/2018 8:02:00 PM
Thank you Judith. Loved your write, Your Sun. very touching.

Book: Shattered Sighs