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My Mind Wanders

Decided to write about the ills of the world. Perhaps I'd need a bigger forum for such a vast undertaking. Now let me see, where should I start, with the Neanderthals? Well, methinks nothing much has changed since we became “civilized”. Wow! That was quite a stretch, The word civilized is open to interpretation. In my wee brain, it means acting in a civilized manner towards our fellow *****sapiens. Listen to the six o'clock news any day and you'd be hard pressed to find any examples of civilized behavior. Is it just the mood I'm in today? NO! It's been like this since the dawn of time. I absolutely DO NOT UNDERSTAND!!! Can we justify it by saying, “It's who we are... a combative species?” There, that lets us off the hook. With today's modern technology methinks it will only get worse. We will all become detached from our feelings, robotic like the mechanical creatures that will someday be the rue of mankind. I don't want to be alive to see it!

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Date: 8/15/2018 11:18:00 AM
we've a ways to go and technology ain't going to get us there...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/15/2018 11:23:00 AM
Where did the simple live go or am I dreaming!!!!!
Date: 8/15/2018 10:49:00 AM
Sadly we are surrounded by them...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/15/2018 11:00:00 AM
Seems like more so than ever these days eh!!! Have a great day my good friend!!!
Date: 8/15/2018 8:41:00 AM
I hear ya Hun. Been thinking myself, anyone thinking we live in a civilized society ought to try riding a bike in my neighbourhood. Awesome penning. Love and hugs! xomo
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/15/2018 8:53:00 AM
I remember when things were very much different or it was just because I was young and hadn't really listened to what was going on! Very cerebral today eh... where did Happy Jack gp? He's still here in spite! You definitely bring me back to the fun stuff!!! Love, Happy (still) Jack XOX

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