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My Mind Is Twisted



My mind is twisted, not your average mind Off centre is a good way to describe it Not saying it's a bad thing or totally unwelcome Kinda like this weird kinda twist Normal and mundane just has never appealed Always had a strange outlook for sure Look at things from a different perspective A little weird but sure not a bore Everyone should try it, just give it a whirl Why am I promoting this thing Until you experience it you'll never know joy It will cause your dear heart to sing I'm really not special, just discovered a truth To feel happiness all else above Since grade school, teen years, now old and grey The secret's no secret, it's love My mind is twisted, not your average mind Off centre is a good way to describe it Not saying it's a bad thing or totally unwelcome Kinda like this weird kinda twist © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 10/9/2013 4:43:00 PM
a really delightful piece penned beautifully
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/9/2013 4:47:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend Liam... much appreciated~ Cheers!
Date: 10/9/2013 1:06:00 PM
Thanks Jack for reading and commenting on my recent posting. I've truly enjoyed this poem; your usual inner-most feeling that reflects the total outer world experience. Cheers Jack! JM
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Date: 10/9/2013 1:12:00 PM
Everyone has unique qualities... some twisted, some more the norm! I can't be anyone else but me! Thank you once more for your kind words... they are ever appreciated! Cheers!
Date: 10/9/2013 9:54:00 AM
All here at Troll Lake and Acorn Falls agree: Love is not twisted... Like us, It's perfectly normal. LOL... We were doing so well till I added that last part... Love is the basis for our good feelings... like hope, and kindness... or is it the other way around? No Dragon... I'm right! We love you and keep hoping all sorts of things... Like you'll some day behave... LOL... OOOPPPS! Gotta run... I disagreed with Dragon... and we all know he's always right! Put the barbecue sauce down! Bye!...
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:17:00 AM
Your reviews by far are the most interesting and may I add kooky!!! Much love dear Carol xoxox
Date: 10/9/2013 9:45:00 AM
A twist in the mind is really quite acceptable - but a twist in the trousers is totally uncomfortable! I liked this one, Jack - not your average mind, for sure :) xox
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:14:00 AM
Average is just average? What is normal anyway? LOL You are always so supportive my dear Miss Wattle! Thanks a bunch... hugz xox
Date: 10/9/2013 9:00:00 AM
From an outside perspective, you may be weird. But, I am weird too. So, to me, you're normal. ;-) Nicely said! =D
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Date: 10/9/2013 9:26:00 AM
I guess everyone'a little weird in their own way... it's what makes us unique! Thank you once more my very good friend!
Date: 10/9/2013 8:05:00 AM
DON'T YOU DARE GO AND SAY THAT ABOUT KENNY! Twisted, INDEED! That's how everyone's mind should be! Lovely write....Precious!!!
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Date: 10/9/2013 8:28:00 AM
I really don't mind being a little off centre... it's got me this far! YOU ARE THE SWEETEST!!!!! Thank you dear lady! Huggsies xoxoxox
Date: 10/9/2013 7:38:00 AM
Love is always good Jack.. I love your kind of twisted :) all smiles throughout reading this one
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Date: 10/9/2013 7:44:00 AM
You are a real sweetie, my dear Miss Wilma! Happy to see you smiling... hugs xoxox
Date: 10/9/2013 6:53:00 AM
Yes, this is a tremendous way to live my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this stupendous poem this morning! I really enjoyed reading this harmonious piece, what a fantastic poem here Jack, Fabulous Work!!
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Date: 10/9/2013 7:13:00 AM
Ha! It's my faithful companion, Tonto! You are always there to greet me, my friend! Thank you