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My Mind

My mind unravels like yarn in a child's hand A flood of thoughts and perceptions woven together by a comen thirst for knowledge It's what makes me No one can imagine the deep dark ideas that float in my head Only to be transversed by the ultimate enlightenment I feel on a daily basis These contradicting ideas fill my brain It is if I have two identities Two identities struggling for domination within me But then again.... Don't we all have this struggle?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/28/2012 5:18:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Grayson. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2012 7:16:00 PM
Indeed we do. You might try thinking about very specific things in order to control and channel your "flood of thoughts..." etc. into appropriate and useful directions.
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Date: 2/27/2012 6:18:00 PM
yes we do! Light & Love [you might like my new poem Liar's TRUTH]
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