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My Mind

My mind is a dreamy river, that flows untiring - smooth and rapid, murmuring the words it adores, the burbles of its ponderings. Date: 11/30/2020 Submitted for: Liberum Divisa 3 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden Contest Judged: Placed fifth in Premier Contest Original Poem: 'Murmurs' dated 11/27/2020

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 4/20/2021 3:28:00 AM

Ani Very nice! congrats on your win!!

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2021 2:10:00 PM

Ani, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/20/2021 9:51:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Constance for the visit and your valuable comment. Hugs :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/17/2021 9:11:00 AM

Lovely imagery.....Congratulations on your placement. SuZ

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:15:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Suzanne. Hugs :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/17/2021 6:52:00 AM

Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:14:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Sara. Hugs :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/17/2021 6:42:00 AM

delightful, Anitha ~ congrats

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:13:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Line.. Hugs :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 2/17/2021 6:28:00 AM

Congratulations, Anitha, on the win, for this lovely craft!!

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:13:00 PM

Thank you so much Newton. God bless :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/17/2021 6:12:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Anitha! Linda

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:12:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Linda. Hugs :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/17/2021 5:02:00 AM

A lovely write! Congratulations!

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:12:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Kim. Hugs :)

Carol Mitra

Date: 2/17/2021 4:58:00 AM

Such a sweet poem Anitha...much love :)

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Carol. God bless :)

Peter Dome

Date: 12/1/2020 4:30:00 AM

Love this so much. so clever. well done. hope you win. Take care. pete.

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/2/2020 6:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for the visit and comment Peter. Have a great day. God bless. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/30/2020 5:02:00 PM

'Burbles!' -- great word! I'll teach it to my gerbil. :) gw

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/30/2020 10:05:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershon. Much appreciate your visit and valuable comment. Yes I too liked that word. Best regards. :)

Silent One

Date: 11/30/2020 12:27:00 PM

I see you have learned some new words and continued them in this poem .. good luck in the contest..

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/30/2020 10:04:00 PM

Ahh yes! Every day we learn.. we never stop learning isn't it? This stanza is from the same poem 'Murmurs'. Just thought would use it for this contest. Thank you for the visit, valuable comment and blessings SO. :)