My Mind

My mind is a dreamy river, 
that flows untiring - smooth and rapid, 
murmuring the words it adores, 
the burbles of its ponderings. 





Date: 11/30/2020
Submitted for: Liberum Divisa 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

Contest Judged: Placed fifth in Premier Contest

Original Poem: 'Murmurs' dated 11/27/2020

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Date: 4/20/2021 3:28:00 AM
Ani Very nice! congrats on your win!!
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Date: 2/18/2021 2:10:00 PM
Ani, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/20/2021 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Constance for the visit and your valuable comment. Hugs :)
Date: 2/17/2021 9:11:00 AM
Lovely imagery.....Congratulations on your placement. SuZ
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:15:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Suzanne. Hugs :)
Date: 2/17/2021 6:52:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:14:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Sara. Hugs :)
Date: 2/17/2021 6:42:00 AM
delightful, Anitha ~ congrats
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:13:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Line.. Hugs :)
Date: 2/17/2021 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Anitha, on the win, for this lovely craft!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Newton. God bless :)
Date: 2/17/2021 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Anitha! Linda
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:12:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Linda. Hugs :)
Date: 2/17/2021 5:02:00 AM
A lovely write! Congratulations!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:12:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Kim. Hugs :)
Date: 2/17/2021 4:58:00 AM
Such a sweet poem Anitha...much love :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Carol. God bless :)
Date: 12/1/2020 4:30:00 AM
Love this so much. so clever. well done. hope you win. Take care. pete.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/2/2020 6:14:00 AM
Thank you so much for the visit and comment Peter. Have a great day. God bless. :)
Date: 11/30/2020 5:02:00 PM
'Burbles!' -- great word! I'll teach it to my gerbil. :) gw
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/30/2020 10:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon. Much appreciate your visit and valuable comment. Yes I too liked that word. Best regards. :)
Date: 11/30/2020 12:27:00 PM
I see you have learned some new words and continued them in this poem .. good luck in the contest..
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/30/2020 10:04:00 PM
Ahh yes! Every day we learn.. we never stop learning isn't it? This stanza is from the same poem 'Murmurs'. Just thought would use it for this contest. Thank you for the visit, valuable comment and blessings SO. :)
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