Anitha Jayasankar Poet Free verse

My Mind

My mind is a dreamy river, 
that flows untiring - smooth and rapid, 
murmuring the words it adores, 
the burbles of its ponderings. 





Date: 11/30/2020
Submitted for: Liberum Divisa 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

Contest Judged: Placed fifth in Premier Contest

Original Poem: 'Murmurs' dated 11/27/2020

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Krish Radhakrishna April 20, 2021 at 3:28 AM Ani Very nice! congrats on your win!!

Constance La France February 18, 2021 at 2:10 PM Ani, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance Anitha Jayasankar February 20, 2021 at 9:51 AM Thank you so much dear Constance for the visit and your valuable comment. Hugs :)

Suzanne Delaney February 17, 2021 at 9:11 AM Lovely imagery.....Congratulations on your placement. SuZ Anitha Jayasankar February 17, 2021 at 9:15 PM Thank you so much dear Suzanne. Hugs :)

Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 6:52 AM Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara Anitha Jayasankar February 17, 2021 at 9:14 PM Thank you so much dear Sara. Hugs :)

Line Gauthier February 17, 2021 at 6:42 AM delightful, Anitha ~ congrats Anitha Jayasankar February 17, 2021 at 9:13 PM Thank you so much dear Line.. Hugs :)

Newton Ranaweera February 17, 2021 at 6:28 AM Congratulations, Anitha, on the win, for this lovely craft!! Anitha Jayasankar February 17, 2021 at 9:13 PM Thank you so much Newton. God bless :)

Linda Alice Fowler February 17, 2021 at 6:12 AM Congratulations on the win Anitha! Linda Anitha Jayasankar February 17, 2021 at 9:12 PM Thank you so much dear Linda. Hugs :)

Kim Rodrigues February 17, 2021 at 5:02 AM A lovely write! Congratulations! Anitha Jayasankar February 17, 2021 at 9:12 PM Thank you so much dear Kim. Hugs :)

Carol Mitra February 17, 2021 at 4:58 AM Such a sweet poem Anitha...much love :) Anitha Jayasankar February 17, 2021 at 9:11 PM Thank you so much Carol. God bless :)

Peter Dome December 1, 2020 at 4:30 AM Love this so much. so clever. well done. hope you win. Take care. pete. Anitha Jayasankar December 2, 2020 at 6:14 AM Thank you so much for the visit and comment Peter. Have a great day. God bless. :)

Gershon Wolf November 30, 2020 at 5:02 PM 'Burbles!' -- great word! I'll teach it to my gerbil. :) gw Anitha Jayasankar November 30, 2020 at 10:05 PM Thank you so much Gershon. Much appreciate your visit and valuable comment. Yes I too liked that word. Best regards. :)

Silent One November 30, 2020 at 12:27 PM I see you have learned some new words and continued them in this poem .. good luck in the contest.. Anitha Jayasankar November 30, 2020 at 10:04 PM Ahh yes! Every day we learn.. we never stop learning isn't it? This stanza is from the same poem 'Murmurs'. Just thought would use it for this contest. Thank you for the visit, valuable comment and blessings SO. :)