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My Memory Is Slipping Away

I call to mind our nights till dawn Watching the sunrise Beautiful was that ocean of gold sky We looked into each others eyes with love Our future was a lovely rose unfolding We had many wonderful dreams Our life's had no shadows just open roads And in dreams you exist So sad This love is lost So sad I pray to God with tears So sad Just another empty day And I go to our secret place So sad I loved you, I think My memory is slipping away I call to mind an adventurous boyish man I am still breathless when I think of you Were you a dream? (Were you a dream?) So sad This love is lost So sad I pray to God with tears So sad Just another empty day And I go to our secret place So sad I loved you, I think My memory is slipping away The pages of my life have turned And I wish that our journey did not end Your motorcycle and the road met And I travelled on without you by my side I want to scream but I keep it inside my soul My memory is slipping away So sad This love is lost So sad I pray to God with tears So sad Just another empty day And I go to our secret place So sad I loved you, I think My memory is slipping away __________________________ May 13, 2016 Poetry/Lyric/My Memory Is Slipping Away Copyright Protected, ID 16-789-300-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Theme - the lost love of an old woman For the contest, Slipping Away sponsor, Becca Teagan Sixth Place
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 2:13 PM
Wow! Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed this. # 7 ; )
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Constance, is this for your soul mate? I love how you took the theme and made it so personal. Lovely poem . Congrats on your win.
Teagan Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Very sad and lovely song, Constance. Congratulations on your win in my Slipping Away contest
Raina Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Wonderful lyrics and....best wishes for the contest.
Ogundare Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Wonderful... you expressed the theme well...#7.~Abosede.
Daniel Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 12:35 AM
Wow! Great way of expressing what the song says in your unique words:)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 6:33 PM
You captured the essence of the theme. Well expressed Constance.
Martin Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 5:14 PM
another beautiful poem, Constance! I really liked this one.
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