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My Melodious Muse

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                                       Sensitively
                                       I hold YOU
                               [ in my arms so very ]
                                       tenderly, as
                               [ if an extension from ]
                                       my very own
                               [ being the supple and ]
                                       lithe  form of
                                         your body,
                                          my muse.
                                          I am as a
                                          kid again-
                                          alive  with 
                                          the glows
                                          of being in
                                          the  midst
                                          of your so
                                          sweet and
                                          m elodious
                                          c om pa ny
                                          as free and
                                          com pletely
                                          joyous as I
                                          h a ve  ever
                                          been  in my
                                          whole entire
                                          existence 'til
                                          now - totally
                                          drenched  in
                                          plenitude. So
                                          whenever I'm
                                          joined in your
                                          aspect, all the
                                          soft  curves of
                                          your fine torso
                                          r e sonate with
                                          m y thoughtful
                                          intents and wild
                                          imaginings. You
                                          are naught with
                                       -out my deft caress,
                           and I, empty and incomplete without
                   you, yet together we create a harmony, pure, the
             articulation of sublime revelation ... an utterance of divine,
       inspired creativity, a dance                     of improvisation and revel
    -ry, melodic wonderment,                               unified and concise. We
   endeavor to find  our em                                -pyreal song, to  thus be-
  come one, stealing silence,                                 lulls. I  gently  caress your
  neck  with resolve, manipu-                               late you with my dutiful and
  competent hands,  each  fin-                           ger with its own very resolute
  course, attending your whispers                 with appreciation, and longing to
   hear the moans and sighs of your sweet voice and affect... the coy result of
      our purposeful, energetic joinings, are your soulful, rare and resonating
         arias - the final and fitting example of all we realize in each other.. all
             we create in our requisite energies. I remember back to the very
                first time that we met, you with your brightly colored trap-
                  pings and shiny baubles, the strength of your supple
                  shape rippling with lines of poetic perfection, you took
                 my very breath away! Oh, I had seen others of your ilk
              been with others who spoke with  similar lilt, but none that
         pulled the breath instantly from my lungs, none who made me qui
    -ver with anticipation, to touch you, run my hands over your ample con
  -tours, to hear you whisper a sultry voice to the tympans of my ears - such
 ecstasy I imagined ... and ecstasy it WAS! I had watched you from afar for so
long ... dreaming, never really expecting you'd ever be mine, but that day I fin-
ally knew - knew I'd hold you, touch you, love you, make YOU tremble, the way
you had me! I would finally get to inhale the sweet, earthy fragrance of your so-
smooth, unblemished flesh, finally know the completeness and exquisite joys of
cradling you in my arms! And oh the beautiful things we have realized and done
 together ...  what incredible music we have made! Our spirits always united as
  one, moving, sighing, creating every sublimated harmonic expression that we
   can imagine, and always together, always joined by a magic thus unequaled,
     always bound by the song of life, and the voice of the heavens! You shall
       be mine forever, my Sweet Lady, and I mean to hold you and love you
         until both of us can sing no more! Until the very skies no longer can
            vibrate with the musings of nature - until the weep of the even's
                clouds dries up and turns to dust ... until the roaring beat
                     of thunder no longer shakes the ground ... until the
                         gods themselves wipe the constellations from
                               the sky - this I pledge to you, my love
                                        and my agency of art, my
                                                      guitar.




August 24, 2018
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Castellenas Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 1:25 PM
A amazing use of words and Photo/form of poem. Perfect.
Barden Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 11:09 PM
Thank you so much, John, I'm glad you enjoyed it, my friend! :-)
Nicole Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Congratulations Greg, on this win. Your words truly create the mood, the moment. ~ Brandy
Barden Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 11:08 PM
That's very kind of you, Brandy, thanks so much! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Wow again, Gregory. Back with most deserving win.
Barden Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Thank you very much, Line!
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 3:38 AM
wow this is stunning Greg! many congrats hugs Jan xx
Barden Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Thank you so very much, Jan! :-) <3
Hamilton Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 9:15 PM
Back to number 4 on the top 100 you scored great with this one Greg, what did I tell you!!
Barden Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Very kind of you, John, thank you so much! :-)
Duet Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 5:53 PM
Wow!! Just...wow! Fabulous poetic skill, Greg. I am such a fan of everything you write but this one is the kind of poem I'll never forget. Congrats and FAVED of course.
Barden Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 11:05 PM
That's so sweet of you, Carole, and I greatly appreciate your kind words ... I'm so pleased that you liked this one! Blessings! :-) <3
Roper Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 3:44 PM
This gorgeous design and the poem is great, Greg. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
Barden Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Thank you so very much, Eve - blessings! :-) <3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Simply gorgeous. Your hard work paid off dear poet. Be proud of this spectacular piece. Thank you and congratulations Greg :) xomo <3
Barden Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Thank you so very much, Mo, I greatly appreciate it, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 10:44 PM
This is spectacular, but so sad for you that it got jumbled. I am reading it from my Kindle and it is just is not wide enough. I can see how lovely it will be with room. Congratulations on your win Greg. : )
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 2:03 AM
I am on my desk top computer and I can see it. Really nice Greg! I am having computer problems right now. My Antivirus did not renew and I am locked out of my Microsoft Word where I form my poetry. So irritating. My husband will help me try to activate it tomorrow. Nite xxoo
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 10:46 PM
Oh, thanks so much, Connie, I hope you get to see it on a PC sometime ... it doesn't work well on phone or tablet, sadly, but is rather stunning on a computer. My fault, live and learn! :-) <3
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Hello Gregory, All I can say is Wow!!!!!! how idi you do this shape? I am impressed. have a nice day my friend.
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene ... this was a LOT of work. The poem itself took me hours, then to arrange it and tweak it into a guitar with straight lines and smooth curves, hours more. I'm pleased that you appreciate it!
Hamilton Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Magnificent work Greg, my my...you have been busy, masterful writing, I don't think too many of our female counterparts will easily get through this read! A fave for me for sure!
Barden Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Very kind of you to say, John, I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Shape poems are not my strong suit, but this one was fun, (and the tornado one), and worth the time spent, though much more of an investment than the norm. That's how we grow, yes? Blessings, Bud! :-)
Lindley Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 9:24 AM
The enormity in the creativity shown in this exceptional piece awes me my good friend. The content of the verses and the image you have created both are works of art by a superb artist! A fav, a beauty and a truly wondrous creation!
Barden Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 2:37 AM
This is such a wonderful comment, Robert, and it means a great deal ... this one took a lot of work, and I'm very proud of it, and so glad you enjoyed it! I'm not great with shape poems, but I'm still striving to improve. Blessings, my friend! :-)
Krutsinger Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 11:50 PM
I have never seen such a gorgeous concrete poem! I cannot get even a tiny square to look "write" on my computer. This is perfect if you ask me. My sweet lady must have been impressed!
Barden Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:58 AM
That's very kind of you, Caren, thank you so much - I'm glad you enjoyed it! :-)
Nicole Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Play for me!! If it were possible, the words from this perfectly placed poem would linger in sweet melody. You have created a masterpiece. :) Aside from your poem. I have always wanted to be serenaded. Yes, by guitar or by piano. Never happened in reality, but in my dreams it has. ~ Brandy
Barden Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:57 AM
Oh, this is such a sweet comment, Brandy, and I am so flattered - I'm so pleased it touched your heart! I play many instruments, (including piano and guitar), but guitar is my primary - songwriting and studio production my true love. If we should ever meet, I will certainly honor you with a serenade! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 3:29 PM
Looks great to me! Love the guitar!
Barden Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Thank you so very much, Kim - glad you enjoyed it! :-) <3
Cozart Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Looks like a guitar to me. How'd you do that?
Barden Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Thanks, Dale! (And no italics!) I did it with my space bar ... and a wee bit of extra time. ;-)
Gauthier Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Wow - what a beauty, Gregory!
Barden Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Thanks, Line! :-) <3
Warrior Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Your guitar gently weeps, my friend...and your concrete solid...a fav...love & light...^WW^
Barden Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Many kind thanks, ^WW^ - greatly appreciated, my friend! This took some work, lol. ;-)
Haight Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 8:37 AM
OMG, Greg! What a work of art you've created with this amazing Concrete form that embodies your beautiful, exquisite poem so metaphorically written as a tribute to your melodious muse and the fine instrument of your talent! Top of the Podium for sure for me as well as FAVE! Sandra :) <3
Barden Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 12:01 PM
This is a very sweet comment, Sandra, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one - I put a LOT more time into it than I expected to, lol. Blessings, Dear friend! :-) <3
Lawless Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 7:42 AM
HOLY CRAP.....Gregory....you gotta start drinking DECAF!! I can't even get a triangle shape to behave. this is really amazing. Every woman on PS wishes someone would talk to them like this.
Barden Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Ha! Thank you, John - so glad you enjoyed it! It took WAY too much time, though, lol. Blessings, friend! :-)
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